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If Spectra is not allowed in the competition, I would use both Astensia and Thor at the same time and decimate the rest of the competitions.
I feel that a lot of times the dialogues feel…sterile? I think that’s the word.
Summoners being unable to use summons is like asking swordsmen to not use swords or magicians with no magic
So it’s like Spoink
If I didn’t know that this is not a purely gooning novel, I would be concerned.
This feels like the stupid AI in escort quests where the target goes straight to the enemies…
Man, I would definitely want to be this kind of summoner. Mechs are the best!
Can you imagine if that is Harribel?
This sounds like an AI Dungeon Master giving you clues for a quest xD
I’m going to continue reading, but this is tough. You should change the dialogues into something more realistic and not just leave the robotic and sterile dialogues that the AI writes.