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I Have enjoyed this book so far, I'm on Ch.98/100 something (currently out), and would say I recommend at least giving it a read, because I like this author's world building, the only thing I want different in this series is less author comments made inside the book such as "he would find out he didn't have to worry about that" made me feel like it was a spoiler put into the book that kinda removed the thrill of not knowing.
Has some grammatical errors but doesn't feel like it's been put through Google translate 20 times so a lot better then some books on here. The only other criticism I really have is that it feels like it rushes to its plot points too fast early on but if that changes I will change the review, If you put those two things aside tho the author does feel like they know where they want to go with the stories and it seems like it will be good just needs to rush the plot less.
Moooooore, it's start to get really good, at first I thought you were going to make an off brand vampire, and I was kinda disappointed because then you might as well just change his race to vampire, but I like this a lot very well done. also if you have any artwork the characters I would love to see them.
This story is really good especially at the beginning but it has slowed down too much for me in the recent chapters. So I will have to come back to it later and because of this I highly recommend this book in the beginning and if you can handle having the slow progression of the later chapters other wise I think you should wait and once the story picks up again pick it up again.
I really like this but I feel like you hop around a lot or don't hint at why this stuff is happening enough, like in the last page he was maybe going to make a soul beast or maybe choose one never decided then go into this chapter where it's something completely different without explaining or even hinting at why in any way
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