Bro the writing on this chapter I love twists in time like this!!! Exceptional and exemplary! I love it

Why does he never mention Nate he was such a big roll in the beginnning!

He is doing the marriage thing right now so probably on a honeymoon

No problem I am enjoying the story so far though it’s got good potential and a nice storyline

*punched

Not a bad story just needs to be written with more past tense so it reads smoother. Ex: he runs and punches the hand….he ran and punches the hand. Sounds better

Well thank you for your time and good fortune to you!

Hey I’ve Enjoyed your stories but had to ask have you dropped A story of Evil