CloudyAlliance

Getting positive feedbacks are good source of motivation and getting bad feedback is the best way to improve on your art.

I'm quite curious how the children pov tho.

at this rate naruto will get MS before Sasuke

but of course the author wouldn't let that happen. Rocks will still die cuz canon.

This is so dumb, he lost a lot and he will lose more if he teaches AIs but then he gained nothing.

he sure like em adc since he got Janna template

like a breeze

this escalated so fast

That hit like bolt out of the blue, this comment is not meant to criticize and take author's passion in writing, I like your story so I hope you can flesh out what happens more clearly. A foreshadowing would've been helpful or FL viewpoint earlier than this chapter, clearly it felt like FL just suddenly fell in love with MC in single chapter. Aside from that MC just go he already knew before, although we had already been following on them closely, we haven't gotten a hint from him on the previous chapters.