awn damn man, I was super hyped about the new chapter to finally see the evolution and he posted the same chapter :/ hope he fixes it ASAP

this ending gave me goosebumps...wonder the next chapter :v

cool. but it's weird seeing someone named ajax cuz it's a famous cleaning product here LMAO

I have never even heard of it plus I've only posted it here...

sorry but I have no idea what's rrl

AMAZING! The book is extremely good. You can feel the Author emotions while writing when reading the story. It has and incredible big potential. ☺️

thanks ☺️

Thank you very much 💕 Stay tuned. more incredible chapters fresh from the oven are coming

First of all I want to emphasize that this is the first work of the Author. There's a good update stability, even tough it's a new novel. The story progress very well and the start is pretty good. The characters are very well made and you can put yourself in the place of the Main Character, as if living hr story while reading. The story is well written. I haven't noted any notable English errors - I mean notable because I myself an not native speaker, so I may miss some minor erros - and the wording choice is very good and concise. You can really understand what is transmitted. Great work! I recommend. Moreso knowing that this is only the beginning of an Author that has great potential [img=recommend]