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The Targaryens are not fireproof. What happened to Daenerys was short-term protection through the ritual. Nothing more.

I didn't like that you turned such a serious and realistic story into a children's story. I guess you don't have a sense of distance. Never mind. I don't feel like writing that long. In short, I had hopes when I saw the five stars, but the stupid readers did it again.

Just because you don't know doesn't mean it doesn't exist

I don't get what people like about the Superman nonsense.

He keeps saying things he shouldn't say. He's talking the way 40-year-olds in the world talk. The story is really getting fucked up. I'm upset

Except for Naruto, Tsunade and Jiraiya, none of the village ninjas address Sandai as Hiruzen-san. He should be addressed as Hokage-sama. please fix this it's very noticeable, it breaks the immersion. I'm not sure if that's the right word but I hope you understand.

You can't hide the fact that he grew 4 centimeters in one day and he's 1.54 cm tall when he was only 7 years old.

Who is Wilson?

Because Yahiko is in love with Konan. Why would he save a man who loves his wife?