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Byakko22

Byakko22

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2018-08-28 JoinedEcuador
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  • Byakko22
    Byakko221yr
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    the novel start great I really love as the story progress the mc personality become a mess and not in the good sense he keep losing his morals to the point to comit numerous war crimes even in his own family to the just to advance in his career at one point I didn't know if I was following the same mc so in my point of view this story start great but the cuality slowly star to loose quality to the point it get tired of the same ( the mc whant to do something he stump anything to get it even if that means sacrificing his family)

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    The Mech Touch
    Sci-fi · Exlor
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  • Byakko22
    Byakko221yr
    Replied to LuoYeYouLing

    I was one of the first to read the novel when it came out so the fact I'm still waiting despite the inconsistency in the release if chapter and the long time it take you to write one that means you are good and it is worth the wait so please dont give up because you are good and continue not mater if you get only one follower

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    The Demon King's Cowardly Vessel
    Fantasy · LuoYeYouLing
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  • Byakko22
    Byakko221yr
    Replied to LuoYeYouLing

    I love this novel but the last chapter was 9 months ago so I like to know if the novel was drop or you are going to release a bundle of chapters at some point in time

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    The Demon King's Cowardly Vessel
    Fantasy · LuoYeYouLing
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  • Byakko22
    Byakko221yr
    Posted

    it is a shame the author never finish the novel it's been 9 months since the last chapter and this novel have real potential the only thing I have complains is the synopsis because the mc isn't a normal weak coward human like the synopsis said

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    The Demon King's Cowardly Vessel
    Fantasy · LuoYeYouLing
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  • Byakko22
    Byakko221yr
    Replied to Camoblast

    yea but his convenient luck is one of the the main plots in the novel it was explained like he has the same or more luck than white that's why he always obtain what he needs the only problem is that the reward he obtained are proportional to the danger he face so basically he is stuck in hell mode for everything he does

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    Cultivation Chat Group
    Urban · Legend of the Paladin
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  • Byakko22
    Byakko221yr
    Posted

    the novel is a bit generic but it isn't boring the main problem is that the novel is incomplete . at the end of the novel the mc defeat the boss of that ark and in the next chapter there is an epilogue that dont make any sense and more that 70% of the plot are never explain correctly

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    End of the Magic Era
    Fantasy · Zhuang Bifan
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  • Byakko22
    Byakko221yr
    Replied to Rafian

    then how can you said the author and the mc have brain damage of you dont know the novel PD: you shouldn't make a review if you dont have the capacity to understand the subtexts in the novels

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    Trash Of The Count’s Family
    Fantasy · ohcocanuts
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  • Byakko22
    Byakko222yr
    Replied to Shiveringjenny

    I have read some novels in MTL with different degrees of successes there Is this novel call the highest bounty that translate well in MTL but they are others like apocalypse meltdown that one can barely understand if stop enjoying the novel and start to pice together the correct grammar to make it readable

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    Forty Millenniums of Cultivation
    Sci-fi · The Enlightened Master Crouching Cow
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  • Byakko22
    Byakko222yr
    Replied to Shiveringjenny

    and could you pass me the link of the page you use for the MTL

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    Forty Millenniums of Cultivation
    Sci-fi · The Enlightened Master Crouching Cow
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  • Byakko22
    Byakko222yr
    Replied to Shiveringjenny

    and how readable is the machine translation

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    Forty Millenniums of Cultivation
    Sci-fi · The Enlightened Master Crouching Cow
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  • Byakko22
    Byakko222yr
    Replied to Shiveringjenny

    because I love this novel it one of the best I have ever read and I was hoping to finish the riding the novel even If I have to make a machine translate

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    Forty Millenniums of Cultivation
    Sci-fi · The Enlightened Master Crouching Cow
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  • Byakko22
    Byakko222yr
    Replied to Shiveringjenny

    the translation was dropped or the novel ?

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    Forty Millenniums of Cultivation
    Sci-fi · The Enlightened Master Crouching Cow
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  • Byakko22
    Byakko222yr
    Replied to Byakko22

    sorry for my horrible writing I write that at 3 am hangover

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  • Byakko22
    Byakko222yr
    Replied to Stylish_Demon

    each book represents a stage in humanity evolution base on what I read in the second book the first book is focus on technology like mechs the second book focus in gene evolution . and each book use the previous book as a background for example in book 2 the mc Learn the cultivation method and others thing that the mc of the first book creates but the book never tell you and it is treated as nothin to special also I think there is a suport character in book 2 that aldo apear in book 1 but I am no sure since I haven't read book 1

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  • Byakko22
    Byakko222yr
    Replied to Stylish_Demon

    the two sequels are tempest of the battlefield and tempest of the stellar war each novel can be read independently because each novel is separated by a few generations

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  • Byakko22
    Byakko222yr
    Posted

    this story is part of a trilogy part 2 and 3 are finish but part 1 just start to be translate I hope they finish this story I haven't read part 1 yet

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  • Byakko22
    Byakko222yr
    Replied to Muhammad_Usama1

    are you part of a cult or something because i havent seen so much lack of brain in a long time

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    Forty Millenniums of Cultivation
    Sci-fi · The Enlightened Master Crouching Cow
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  • Byakko22
    Byakko222yr
    Replied to aravindhan

    yea but the author explains to much he could easily cut like 800 chapters and explain a little more background and still get ton of detail take for example forty millenniums cultivation

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    The Mech Touch
    Sci-fi · Exlor
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  • Byakko22
    Byakko222yr
    Replied to TimHQ

    yea the author make the same mistake alot of novice do the good thing is that despite that the story follows a reasonable time line of event and the mc progress is fast but reasonable not like those stores were the mc reach the top in a imposible record time leaving behind all his peers

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    The Mech Touch
    Sci-fi · Exlor
    detail
  • Byakko22
    Byakko222yr
    Posted

    the story start like any generic novel about a system but after some chapters the mc the system became secondary I like the fact the mc didn't became like a super genius who surpass everyone in super record time but his growth is fast but not broken there are some things the author could fix like the story has to many filers don't get me wrong those filers are relevant but they are like 800 chapters of filers that could be reduce to 100 chapters and add some background because the way I see it the 3 main powers have a lot of spy that could discover the truth about the mc and the mc knows the risk but keep using taking a lot of high risk while in the dark

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    The Mech Touch
    Sci-fi · Exlor
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