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DDLK2yrCommentedBro, I don't know how to tell you this. I've been writing a novel, for about 13-14 days now, it's just at the beginning stages. It was about nano machines in a fantasy world which was cross between high fantasy and murim. And I decided to call it "nano cultivation". today I suddenly thought this is probably a unique concept and name. So I tried searching. And the first thing I see is this novel. Man I'm really bummed out now that I didn't write this sooner. But I wish you the best of luck in writing this, because your writing is pretty good. But I'm still gonna write in the way I wanted, and I'll definitely be changing the name. But I hope you don't someday come across my work ( if I ever finish it that is.) And think I tried to plagiarize your book. Besides I read this chapter and from the very beginning it seems like a completely different story compared to what I had in mind (except for the nano machines)
Ch 1 Introduction- DDLK2yrPosted
I really loved this book, like after so many similar books finally someone who writes people with accuracy and the writer created such realistic and intelligent MC but then the writer introduced the flaw, Kamila, which immediately turned the smart Lith into a lovestruck idiot and Kamila is such a well written character and she's very intelligent as well, and very capable but she doesn't really have much motivation to stay with Lith after learning of all the complicated l things about the MCs life other than a 12 year olds irrational emotions of love. I mean chapter 1001-1002 really brought down my expectations of what's to come.
- DDLK2yrPosted
this book seemed like it had so much potential, and I really like cutthroat straight to the point MC but after the first 180 chapters the entire books simply becomes a word-count farming sceme where the either author or translator are just trying find out how many useless words can they use to write the biggest sentences. if the writing was consistent I would have loved to read this book, but after reaching chapter 570 I honestly didn't feel like I read a book but just wasted my time chewing out uselessly long sentences.
- DDLK3yrCommented
the story as a whole has so much substance that a single chapter honestly feels way to insignificant and its very hard to be satisfied. especially for the people who found this series recently and has binged the insanely deep stuff this has to offer.
Ch 542 Potential Allies and Sure Enemies - DDLK3yrCommented
Dan is honestly one of the most chill-est MC's I've ever seen. Sometimesitalk, this is your Magnum Opus.
Daniel, seemingly in high spirits, said through a content smile, "This is sort of a party, is it not? Let's mingle." - DDLK3yrCommented
okay writer-san, you have impressed me with your accurate knowledge of how to survive a bad situation
"Keep your skin covered, wrap something around your heads, and keep your mouths closed.." muttered Daniel before starting to climb the dune, which crumbled under his feet, making his efforts half as efficient. - DDLK3yrCommented
i really hope that meat didn't go in further
"Wait.. you are married!?" asked Dawn while letting go of the control she had over the constructed wooden spike, and causing the piece of meat she was eating to fall on her legs. - DDLK3yrCommented
imagine the consequences if the translater typo'd a 'C' instead of an 'R'. instant age restriction.
"It's accelerating!" Shouted Dawn as Daniel's rock began to move faster and faster, almost leaving their sight in just the moment they had turned away from it. She then shot in the rock's pursuit, making sure that her eyes would never lose sight of it. Her actions were followed by the remaining members of the group only moments later. - DDLK3yrCommented
damn Dan, chil.
When these students had tried to do the same with Daniel, however, as soon as their hostile aura came even close to him, Daniel had slaughtered them all without the slightest hint of hesitation, cutting their bodies into unrecognizable slices of flesh, and erasing their souls and minds with swords of absolute darkness. - DDLK3yrCommented
the Muslim statism is a toxic force that ruins everything. i know because I was one.
Muhammad Ali Jinnah (25 December 1876 – 11 September 1948) is honoured as the founder of Pakistan, where his birthday is observed as a national holiday. He served as leader of the All-India Muslim League from 1913 until Pakistan's independence from Great Britain in 1947, and then as the first Governor-General of Pakistan until his death. Jinnah rose to prominence in the Indian National Congress in the first two decades of the 20th century. In these early years of his political career, he advocated Hindu–Muslim unity, helping to shape the 1916 Lucknow Pact between the Congress and the All-India Muslim League. By 1940, he had come to believe that Muslims of the Indian subcontinent should have their own state. As the first leader of Pakistan, he worked to establish the nation's government and policies, and to aid the millions of Muslim migrants who had emigrated from the new nation of India to Pakistan after independence, personally supervising the establishment of refugee camps. Several universities and public buildings in Pakistan bear Jinnah's name. - DDLK3yrCommented
this entire fight sounds kind of erotic
The air exploded. The beast flung its three formidable tails that are both strong and stiff. It was as rigid as an iron rod! - DDLK3yrCommented
hmmmm.... what kind of substances?
Queer Substances - DDLK3yrReplied to comfort
damn man you knew a lot of people would go looking for the meaning, Nice job
The fumes of the distant past had all but dissipated along the passage of time, but the ancient Yellow River had remained relatively unchanged, despite the baptism of vicissitudes. - DDLK3yrCommented
POG
Naturally, Daniel was once again right. This young man was, just like him, a living entity, and he shouldn't have been able to enter the underworld. Yet, here he was, sitting respectfully next to Death herself despite her not appreciating his presence. Ever since learning that the old lady was the aspect of Death, and that the place where he was now was the underworld of his universe, Daniel had narrowed the young man's identity to a single person. And that was the eldest of Iewah's children. The owner of the system of death, known as the Deathbringer.