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johnopedia1dCommentedCh 429 No Ma, I cant. [2/2]- johnopedia3dCommented
the problem with anyone ego wants something for nothing.
That was one of the major problems with socialists. Instead of working to improve their lives, they blame everyone else. - johnopedia21dReplied to Malcolm_Massey
could be that DGO made the correction. he usually does.
"No need to worry, it wasn't that much trouble anyway, and you were doing errands on my behalf which was why you were not here, so there is no need to apologize either" - johnopedia23dCommented
intact. one word, not two.
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[johnopedia: Replying to Snowking333| Come on bro, who doesn't dream of making a badass speech like that once in their life?] - johnopedia1mthCommented
the average height for a woman in the US is 5' 4"
Constance Faye was a rather small person, perhaps about 5'4", yet the burden she carried was immense. This woman had a regret so powerful that it made her a Reaper. - johnopedia1mthCommented
embraced them tighter
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'Why do they use these types of nicknames in the forum? Fan girl? Really?' - johnopedia1mthPosted
What can I say? writing quality is ok and getting better. I've added corrective comments, and the author reads them. The story development is good, though at times I find myself wishing it would move faster. The characters all have their background and trauma that they're working through. Their back stories provide a way for the author to build the world. Updates are regular so far.
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him raise
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docked not decked
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bogged down
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ceased not seized
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that's the narrative. fit, but fat is such a bs lie.
More than half of my countrymen suffered from obesity as body positivity poisoned our minds to believe that fat fucks were healthy. - johnopedia3mthCommented
Hmm, interesting. ..
The West was strange. They tried to empower their women only to alienate their men. This led them to favor Asian women, who were seen as feminine and submissive. - johnopedia3mthCommented
amen brother!
It robbed you of your daily happiness and made you fearful of the future. - johnopedia4mthCommented
"you're really" or "you really are"
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snag?
Especially since the Crown Prince would travel with us it will emphasize the importance of your company. Thus if they do manage to snug it despite that, and there would be no response from the crown, it would mean that it is safe to move the main plan" - johnopedia4mthCommented
looking up
Her head turned blank again as she only saw a screen of white with the unfocused eyes looing up at the ceiling, and heard a roaring sound of a wave that seemed to never end. - johnopedia4mthCommented
brusque thrusts. drop the 'but'
He started making fast and brusque but thrusts in, following them with a pause and sensual drawing back of his hips, fucking her from behind, and pushing her into the wall.