JokeDagger

well the problem-> where the problem * easy miss type/autocorrect

buddy's trying to figure life out cause no one else will teach him. Slime Girl and the Drake are prob the only ones who can converse on a deep level

almost as if he*

seeked-> sought* seeked isn't a word, pretty sure

after being denied Noah's blood* I feel like the "to have" us kinda useless in this context

"smear the queer" is what my buddies called a similar game when we used to wrestle. Super fun if u dont mind getting pushed around and thrown into padded walls.

Dora to all of Sabody

backspace before "cornered"*

would only cement a cruel, agonizing death.* why you got 2 "death" parts for this sentence? I think you should stick to only one here and clean up the sentence lol

soul was still bridged*