there is a difference between zombies and this. this is way worse then anything that came before it. to me anyway. the first few chapters were cute and fun. the first few chapters set the tone of the story.

I don't really look at tags and R-18 can mean a lot of different things

I didn't sign up for a horror-gore story. you should put something earlier in the story that indicates how brutal this is. the beginning of the story promised a cute fun story about a person who reincarnated into a dog. this is just gruesome. there are probably people who appreciate this kind of thing that are turned off by the cutsy nature of the first few chapters that would read if you indicated it would get this bad latter on. and there are people like me who are turned off by the unexpected gore. you end up with less people reading the story. you might want to describe the MCs first death in more gruesome detail to signal to readers that hey while it starts out cute and fun, it is fundamentally a gruesome horror story. that way more people who appreciate that kind of story will get this far. it's important to make keep the promises you make to your readers, or failing that change going back to update the original promise.

love the title lol 😂

yeah that is going to be especially true for children because they don't have the tools to evaluate a piece of feedback that was given and figure out what parts they should ignore and what they want to change about themselves.

we all process feedback differently. I try to take even rude and mean feedback as an opportunity for introspection. I also try not to take it to personally. idk maybe it is unhealthy, but good feedback is hard to come by so I take what I can get. sometimes I get frustrated when I try to give people feedback and they get defensive and ignore me as a result. it's probably because I give it too bluntly and with the wrong tone of voice as you said. my comment was probably me projecting that fustration onto Hera.

lolol

all of the politics

they need an economist to explain this stuff

you forgot about the best part! characters that actually grow as people.

it's not ironic she specifically chose this location for this reason. lol

she is already a strong FL. although she is physically not strong, she has tons of agency and is able to proactively fight for her own survival. I also am excited to see her grow stronger in her cultivation, but she has always been a strong FL.

magic art super effective

??? I don't understand how this comment relates to mine

lolol consider my disbelief suspended

when you are younger you brain has more neuroplasticity so it is easier to learn. your brain is at its best at 14, and it declines from there

i don't really care about guild politics unless its through Hera's pov.

very good chapters. its fun watching ramian develope all his peeps

i was excited because the book had a promising beginning. she got kicked out of her house because she was ugly and her path to cultivating was blocked and i was excited to read how she or the reincarnated overcame those obstacles. I am disappointed because both of those obstacles were resolved by deus ex machina. you should write the story you want, i am just explaining my perspective.

it would be more interesting then her becoming shockingly pretty if just because it hasn't been done as much. you also could have made it so she is not ugly, just not nearly as good looking as her siblings... i want to read a book where the mc has to overcome obstacles and grow as a person because of it. so yes I think thr mc staying ugly would have been vastly more interesting.