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sounds like a certain someones philosophy
future not looking good for you bud
yeah you guys need to implement his kinship networks right away
almost definitely
which you did a great job with
I kinda agree that the side characters haven't been fleshed out but I think that let you develop your mc and the world more
thank you for writing a great story
this approach has one fatal flaw it doesn't address a way to deal with external threats, not to mention if ves was right designer babies have close to no spirituality
that incident with the cosmopolitans might come back to bite ves
augment
mmm I wonder if the further you agent yourself the hard it is to aquire
oooh like the great Gatsby from bokudo stray dogs
oh pull a skipio and raid their Territory to lure them to your location
honestly it would be cool if she solidified an actual empire across the gap and then utilized the weird properties of it to somehow create a portal to the red sea
it was awesome