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AsurasTear

AsurasTear

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2018-08-21 JoinedGlobal
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  • AsurasTear
    AsurasTear1yr
    Replied to Photosphere

    what happened? why did you erase your own novel? this is so unexpected.

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    The Goddess' Champion
    Fantasy · Photosphere
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  • AsurasTear
    AsurasTear1yr
    Replied to Photosphere

    I did try checking it as I really liked the novel but there is only half of it. there is no mention of the MWB contents at all. Could you give me a site where I can find the whole contents.

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    The Goddess' Champion
    Fantasy · Photosphere
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  • AsurasTear
    AsurasTear1yr
    Replied to Photosphere

    author, I have a question i.e. WHAT HAPPENED TO THE VAMPIRE OF WALL STREET. did you delete it and if so can you upload it again. I hadn't finished reading that stuff yet. I couldn't do d all the chapters of it either in patron or here. Thank you

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    The Goddess' Champion
    Fantasy · Photosphere
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  • AsurasTear
    AsurasTear1yr
    Replied to Shuayeb_Ahmed

    I totally agree. Kick naruto and let wu come in hehehehe

    Ch 23 Secret Technique: Monkey Transcends Time
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    I, Your Father, Carry a Big Stick
    Anime & Comics · Einlion
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  • AsurasTear
    AsurasTear1yr
    Commented

    NOOOOOO. JUST WHY AUTHOR JUST WHY. WHERE IS MY HINATA CHAN? WHY DID YOU LET HER FLY AWAY TO NARUTO

    Ch 23 Secret Technique: Monkey Transcends Time
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    I, Your Father, Carry a Big Stick
    Anime & Comics · Einlion
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  • AsurasTear
    AsurasTear1yr
    Commented

    hello author is it possible to purchase some chapters from you. it is not for public use but for private. I am quite keen on knowing what happens after 560. I can't purchase it from the Chinese website so I was wondering if I could get some from you to study.

    Ch 192 Chapter 191: Original Trajectory—
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    One Piece Gold List: The Strongest Teacher!
    Anime & Comics · Novelette_Seeker
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  • AsurasTear
    AsurasTear1yr
    Commented

    There is no mention about Ayaka reward in this chapter too. Will it be mentioned in the future

    Ch 436 Dull trip but my teacher is hot
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    I Refuse to Become Scumbag in Tokyo
    Anime & Comics · akikan40
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  • AsurasTear
    AsurasTear1yr
    Commented

    there is no mention of the reward from the ayaka. Did the Akikan forget about it.

    Ch 435 Sunoharasou is a nice place
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    I Refuse to Become Scumbag in Tokyo
    Anime & Comics · akikan40
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  • AsurasTear
    AsurasTear1yr
    Commented

    mate we need for like this 🙈

    Ch 236 Tainted 2
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    I Refuse to Become Scumbag in Tokyo
    Anime & Comics · akikan40
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  • AsurasTear
    AsurasTear1yr
    Commented

    mate you should have added bleach too

    Ch -1 Information
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    Sis-Con with Dimensional Chat Group
    Anime & Comics · akikan40
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  • AsurasTear
    AsurasTear1yr
    Commented

    awesome read so far hope the same goes for in the future reAd

    Ch 28 28- Fighting against Buggy Pirates
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    One Piece: The Ship of Lust
    Anime & Comics · muhned
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  • AsurasTear
    AsurasTear1yr
    Posted

    mate everything was fine and dandy. the story was good the character was good the background is kinda mysterious. the update stability so far is nice but there are some problems that author really needs to think about. first of all what is this book about. it's game so you need to make it clear the data about the enemyy when they fight the reward that he gets,the quest that he takes, etc but instead this novel is like an urban slice of life romance type paced story or even an Japanese high school type story which is inconsistent from my point which makes it barely readable like a game novel should be and another point is the exaggeration of expression. for eg. if I say he smiled,".........." which makes sense but when you put he widely smiled,".........." then that makes it extremely exaggerated for me. if it's once or twice it's fine but if it's after every single time that he smiles you put widely after it then it makes it unpalatable for me. overall everything is extremely good but author should definitely focus on what he is writing about if he wants to make the novel a top class which the reader want to read again and again. thank you your sincere reader

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    My legendary class is Husband Of Deathwill Sisters?!
    Games · Sixth
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  • AsurasTear
    AsurasTear2yr
    Replied to wounded_warrior

    is this a harem. pls reply

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    Never Judge
    Realistic · wounded_warrior
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  • AsurasTear
    AsurasTear2yr
    Commented

    sir more than 150 chapters are missing in the beginning could you please upload those.

    This chapter has been deleted.
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    The Vampire of Wall Street [Reposted]
    Anime & Comics · Photosphere
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  • AsurasTear
    AsurasTear2yr
    Commented

    comment to MR Author the first 150 chapters are missing can you upload it back again

    This chapter has been deleted.
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    The Vampire of Wall Street [Reposted]
    Anime & Comics · Photosphere
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  • AsurasTear
    AsurasTear2yr
    Posted

    it's a good book to read but I have to inform the author that more than 100 chapters are missing. you should most probably fix it. as nobody wants to read incomplete novel where chapters are missing.

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    The Vampire of Wall Street [Reposted]
    Anime & Comics · Photosphere
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  • AsurasTear
    AsurasTear2yr
    Replied to Photosphere

    sir your more than 100 chapters are missing. could you check it.

    This chapter has been deleted.
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    The Vampire of Wall Street [Reposted]
    Anime & Comics · Photosphere
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  • AsurasTear
    AsurasTear3yr
    Posted

    one of the best villain mc in fanfiction I have read so far. I hope that author keeps up the good work with stability in development as well as updating the novel. this is one of the unique fanfiction I have read in webnovel. I hope that author continues this same quality in the long run. your fan reader asura

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    Protagonist Killer
    Anime & Comics · Dereck_Oliveira
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  • AsurasTear
    AsurasTear3yr
    Replied to QuietScreamer

    eXp sEcT

    Ch 2 Divine Pick Up Line
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    My Pick Up Artist System
    Urban · SamsaraWithWords
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  • AsurasTear
    AsurasTear3yr
    Commented

    good chapter

    Ch 2 Divine Pick Up Line
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    My Pick Up Artist System
    Urban · SamsaraWithWords
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