"Yin Yang" I'm getting the feeling that rather than harem (which I hope is no longer a ridiculously banned word when its a tag) its more of a booty call setup where he's just one of the guys having fun with them when he and them are around. Which is not a harem and no bueno.

Good attempt but a ninja village that likely regularly gets recruits from the orphanage would have a better setup and at least a warning better than. You have three days to get out before you even have a chance at your first meager D rank paycheck. That was so ridiculous and blatantly forced as the incredibly easy Tenten. Which is a put off for me. If she's that easy then she'll likely be just as much so on her missions or when he's on his whether with her team or not. No Bueno.

Its interesting but I hate it for the simple fact that this idea means the characters are utterly covered in eye sore tattoos all over their bodies. I dislike tattoos in general. Utterly sick of seeing them all over the place usually ruining the girls and women who put them all over themselves. Rarely a tasteful or regular one. As well as a bit of a reminder of that incredibly unpleasant body writing fetish I can't stand.

The bug trick of Shino's wouldn't of actually worked if she was using her Byakugan like the chapter said she was. The bugs can mimic form but they wouldn't be showing a copy of Shino's chakra network for her to see or strike.

Starting off at 18? That really sucks.

Wondering how "potential" equaled telekinesis with multiple targets doing precise action of grabbing and snapping necks. Unless they were one at a time and just seemed otherwise. Also how he's suddenly not just picking up thoughts or peering into thoughts but outright ripping info from someone's mind. Thats a lot more than just potential. The knife joke was too far. Unless they took it as a joke that should've kept him secure for longer out of fear from such a mentality. If thats normal he's very dangerous. Especially from a world with a God emperor thats conquered over a million worlds. I'd find it far more likely they'd just kill him to be safe. Especially throwing in dealing with demons.

I don't understand why so many authors keep coming back to their stories to freaking delete them. Why not just leave them for people to enjoy even if you drop them? Dozens from my library keep getting deleted one after another and its ticking me off.

I sincerely hope this doesn't go the route with her finding out about Mr Greengrass and someone going after the family he is close to.

I gotta say all 3 choices aren't preferable. Waging war is an obvious no for many reasons. The second option sounds tedious and annoying. Also ruling the world is also a big task that doesn't sound enjoyable either. Chilling sounds fun but not all the time. Also given the situation feels like a big waste. Couldn't he just become powerful enough that he COULD take over the world without actually doing so? Being able to handle the bs big bads that can and will show up who could destroy worlds and then some. Likely having to face them. That would definitely not be doing nothing. Just having the option of going on a slaughter fest or playing business tycoon sucks. Well that or be killed.

I just remembered Gibles evolutions have no hands...

So he really is leaving them behind? Of so what was the point of destroying peoples lives to borrow the women for a little while and then leave them?

Barely seen any involving Goblin Slayer and they all let the goblins violate and kill the other girls.

Also while the vast majority of stories get dropped. As for the harem genre I think I've only found 2 good or better ones that actually reached completion and one of those two is yours. Add in the huge downturn on people posting that genre, at least on FF and the mass deletions and its even worse on the genre. -300+ Really don't need these people going to these stories and getting the authors to change them on top of all that.

Did my main comment in a reply to Drywall. Aside from that I can say I'm not among those who are okay with changing the story and compromising it for a bunch of people who are complaining about harems in a harem tagged story. There's plenty without that they can enjoy instead of getting authors to remove or hamper harem stories for those who enjoy them. Especially so in your case since you're an amazing author and most for the genre are incredibly bad gotta catch em all types that might as well use pokeballs at how easy and quick they capture them. Many times literally as soon as they meet them and then basically put in storage to barely or never be seen again once aquired. To have one of the VERY few who can do a good job of it back off because of them is extremely annoying, frustrating, and disappointing. According to Drywall's comment the same was done in another of your stories makes it even more obnoxious.

End of your comment just clicked, barely awake. Thats a serious downer finding out another of his stories I was going to read ends up being hampered.

He did that part showing he wasn't going to go that route. Then he went and set it up so that All Might would end up with his mom by having him stay at his house alongside Toga. At least thats what I thought but now he's booted Toga out of his life and undone what was a great setup for hooking Inko and All Might up together like I thought he was. I really don't like this reset. Just undoing it all and altering the things with Toga like that. Even if this was done because he changed his mind about adding Inko I wouldn't want time just being reset like this. How much did it undo? Everything he did undone, the people born or dead. Did anything change there? Is it an alternate timeline? Just sent to earlier in time and everything after continues on or is erased? Seems more like an alternate reality with how Toga is changed. So many thoughts and it comes down to I really don't like this.

Left out young justice.

I don't understand the numbers. Even if you don't count the rest of the world I can't see the internet using people of the US during that havoc and after all the news of him only having a measles 5 million people viewing that stream. And again the people of the world should be viewing them after the fact too into the billions but there's no sign of that happening credits wise for him.

Can't say I'm not disappointed seeing that he won't be with them all. Unless everyone instead meant every heroine and not just that group of girls. What's really disappointing though is the last part saying he'll end up splitting apart from the others eventually. I'm seriously against that. In any story.

Rare there's a party option. At least with the ones I've read. Really annoying when there isn't and its a harem story. Leaving everyone in the dust when it doesn't have a full system letting him help give items, skills, and such for them to attempt to keep up either.