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Void_Hawk

Void_Hawk

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2018-08-20 JoinedGlobal
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  • Void_Hawk
    Void_Hawk1yr
    Posted

    无敌从签到系统开始最新章节 rawrrrr..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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    I Become Invincible By Signing In
    Urban · Sweet Brand Chewtoy
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  • Void_Hawk
    Void_Hawk2yr
    Replied to Claqiooo

    开局签到亿万豪宅

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    I Signed-In For A Billion Dollar Mansion From The Very Beginning
    Urban · Legendary Youth
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  • Void_Hawk
    Void_Hawk2yr
    Replied to Max_Zeon

    The military guys when he asks for the meteorite

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    Apocalypse: My Technological City has Infinite Upgrades
    Sci-fi · Oranges are not Sour
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  • Void_Hawk
    Void_Hawk2yr
    Posted

    GOOD UNTIL 35TH CHAPTER. A guy shot a bullet at MC, mc doesn't kill him. A random guy asking MC to take him in. MC shoots the guy on his head. A normal guy to a pychopath. What happened to the logic with this author?

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    Apocalypse: My Technological City has Infinite Upgrades
    Sci-fi · Oranges are not Sour
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  • Void_Hawk
    Void_Hawk3yr
    Commented

    get the **** done with the details. 7 chps still dumping infos.

    Ch 7 Mysterious Key
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    Tanky Mage System
    Fantasy · Black Sky
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  • Void_Hawk
    Void_Hawk3yr
    Posted

    Reading this feels like a novel written by a Reader rather than an Author. There is no exciting plots, the MC is plain without much character. Supposedly a guy with ***** previous life and plus 17 years, but still acts like a child, no uniqueness to him . Most characters are also bland. This is a mixed fruit juice of a reader who read a lot of beast taming novels.

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    All My Beasts are Legendary
    Eastern · Da Yu Is Fat Again
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  • Void_Hawk
    Void_Hawk3yr
    Posted

    The title of this novel should be "How not to write a cliche story". I don't know why the author even bother to write. Just like other chinese novels the author dumps a back stabber character who supposedly hate MC while he was in his low. Even though he owes him too much. Just character after character was ripped off of old chinese novels without even bothering to design a plot or character. Same old face slapping to character who hate MC with little to no reason.

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    Museum of Deadly Beasts
    Eastern · Diabolical Eggplant
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  • Void_Hawk
    Void_Hawk3yr
    Posted

    Read upto 67 on raw, but still didn't find anything interesting or a proper image of world building. Unlike LOTM which hooks up from the start, this novel seriously lacks any. The author just goes on a never ending phase of storytelling without any twits or fun. So it's a disappointment for me.

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    Embers Ad Infinitum
    Sci-fi · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Void_Hawk
    Void_Hawk3yr
    Commented

    stupid cliché..

    Her skin was fair and smooth and she had a pretty-looking face. She was already a really cute girl even if she was a chubby one at the same time.
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    Skeleton's Training Manual
    Urban · Angry laughter
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  • Void_Hawk
    Void_Hawk3yr
    Commented

    I can't digest the fact that there is always someone who offends MC for no reason. why do cn novels use this cliche always.

    "What are you so afraid of, Wang Shuo? His dad's bankrupt and his girlfriend left him. He's just a piece of junk now. What wouldn't I dare say?" the young man referred to as Fu Jiafeng said as he steeled himself and looked at Su Mo without fear.
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    Boss Monster Chat Group
    Games · Boating Lyrics
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  • Void_Hawk
    Void_Hawk3yr
    Posted

    I've already read this novel upto 370 chapters. The story starts okay, but after 100 chps, it straight dives into clichés. If you want to burn time then this novel is good. Other than that it's average. And somewhere around starting from 250 chps, he does nothing but killing people.

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    Picking Up Attributes From Today
    Eastern · Panda Reunion
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  • Void_Hawk
    Void_Hawk3yr
    Posted

    One word to describe the novel is "Random". Everything is so random like the author wrote it without thinking or giving any considerations for the plot.

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    Dragon Tamer
    Eastern · Chaos (Fish's Sky)
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  • Void_Hawk
    Void_Hawk3yr
    Commented

    Everything feels so random!!

    Ch 8 Chapter 8: The Degenerate Dragon
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    Dragon Tamer
    Eastern · Chaos (Fish's Sky)
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  • Void_Hawk
    Void_Hawk3yr
    Posted

    Started average, but the story picked up quickly. Very Entertaining and well-written stuff. A worthy novel after months from Webnovel. 10/10. Hope this gets picked up soon.

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    My Prehistoric Man Is Incredible
    Eastern · Bamboo Thorns Without Edge
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  • Void_Hawk
    Void_Hawk3yr
    Posted

    The story starts great, but after/from 17th chapter story takes a u-turn into a utter disappointment. The author clearly wants to increase his word count after 15chps.

    This book has been deleted.