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L2Kai5dCommentedCh 2352 Vanishing at a Flick of the Finger (3)- L2Kai21dCommentedCh 1699 Cursed Genius (1)
- L2Kai1mthCommented
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"Uh, Xu Xiaoshou, just say whatever you want to say. There's no need to beat around the bush." - L2Kai3mthCommented
one of my biggest issues with Xu. After all the cheats and so-called knowledge, especially the sword arts,at the end of the day, he is just copying what others can already do
Those like Bazhun'an were lesser individualsâjust like Ye Xiaotian, they kept to the safest paths, which was a disgrace in the world of geniuses. - L2Kai7mthCommentedCh 1855 Save Me! (3)
- L2Kai7mthCommentedCh 1837 Xu Xiaoshou You Can Indeed Be Called the Number One of the Younger Generation! (3)
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Seriously? After he just tells him not to wish for any OP abilities , he allows him to wish for the mortal instruments, pure angel bloodline, and to be a gifted rune user
supernatural beings who will just kill you just because they don't like you. I didn't want to be a vampire or Werewolf as these were to common,do I then decided my wish and said"I want to be a shadowhunter.But I want to be the Shadowhunter with purest angel blood making me gifted in the rune creation,2nd wish is to have the Institute with every knowledge and weapons in it,3rd wish Intuitive Aptitude and the last wish is to have the Mortal instruments"Call me lazy but he was not about to start from scratch. - L2Kai7mthCommented
This tone of voice most of the mc of fanfiction takes with the supposed God who can do anything he wants with their soul is quite laughable. I'm not sure if the authors want to portray them as being brave or something, but it just comes off to me as people who lack serious self awareness. No sensible person will talk in that tone to someone who can control your life. People can barely talk to their work boss in that tone, much less a creator
I sighed "Let's get this started."GOD snapped his fingers as sin the wheel appeared out of thin air.I deadpanned "So a spinning wheel huh."GOD shrugged said, "Sorry kid this is the only way." - L2Kai7mthCommented
Optimism for the story just took a nose dive
He remembered getting hit by a truck and the next thing you know boom you are in this white room sitting opposite an old man who tells you that he is the Creator and that your death is a mistake and the one who was supposed to die was the girl next to you.I sighed and asked"So do I get to choose the world I get to reincarnate in or is it random?" - L2Kai8mthCommented
Annnndd hope is crushed
Then they turned to Zeke neatly, bowed, and said respectfully. - L2Kai8mthCommented
Don't dash the little hope I have of improvement
Grace looked at the incomparably clear word Zeke on it, and there was no joy in her heart as if she had lost something very important. - L2Kai8mthCommented
No where in all the previous chapters did she express hatred of him.
The person she hated the most, and the person she wanted to leave the most, was the Iron Man who made the whole country go crazy. - L2Kai8mthCommented
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Boom!!! - L2Kai8mthCommented
And the story is turning way worse than I expected it to go
Grace looked in the direction Zeke was leaving, and there was a strange brilliance in her eyes. - L2Kai8mthCommented
She has been honest and straightforward about the divorce, etc, but instead, you want to keep quiet and blindside her at the program with your Iron Legion news Why? To prove what?
The day after tomorrow, in front of 500 million people, he will reveal his identity as Iron Man, and the wind will immediately turn the mill. - L2Kai8mthCommented
Agree. He is disgustingly childish. Transmigrate into someone's body, and act as if she owes you something. Totally ignoring the actions of the original main body as to why she finally came up with a divorce and now trying to act like she is the one who is wrong or bad? Ignoring the facts that she has even helped during your patent issue.
"A person like him, even if he becomes successful and rich, is still so disgusting in his bones." - L2Kai8mthCommented
This MC is really pathetic. Unless this is plot, so he gains growth, this makes him someone with a weak character.
"Are you going to regret it?" - L2Kai8mthCommented
The idea that no one knows he controls animals is dumb. An insult to the human brain, especially in a world where magic in some form exists with direwolves and dragons familiar. How many times do you want to see thousands of Ravens fights in a war or follow a man before it clicks? As if ravens are common to human settlements. And want happened to the bears?
Ch 59 Chapter 58 - L2Kai8mthCommented
Seems being reborn and conveniently remembering plots,etc, but having some memories wiped to explain the constant switch between childish and mature behaviour easy. Also seems to be a trend for your MC in all your three books I have read so far. I'm not sure which came first, though. Same personality for them all
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