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Rose_Patrona

Rose_Patrona

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2018-08-21 JoinedIndia
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  • Rose_Patrona
    Rose_Patrona3yr
    Commented

    Author even though you try to make it interesting it causes boring feel sometimes. You can be dramatic but not too long. Try to make the story line move a bit faster. Every time I open the chapter it just drags and get to know everything after 1 or 2 chapters.

    Ch 857 A Strong Opposition (6)
    The Days of Being in a Fake Marriage with the CEO
    Urban · Aromatic Peach Blossoms
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  • Rose_Patrona
    Rose_Patrona3yr
    Commented

    Mass release please!!!

    Ch 857 A Strong Opposition (6)
    The Days of Being in a Fake Marriage with the CEO
    Urban · Aromatic Peach Blossoms
    detail
  • Rose_Patrona
    Rose_Patrona3yr
    Commented

    Mass release please!!!!

    Ch 842 Return (4)
    The Days of Being in a Fake Marriage with the CEO
    Urban · Aromatic Peach Blossoms
    detail
  • Rose_Patrona
    Rose_Patrona3yr
    Commented

    Why is the chapter too short?

    Ch 676 The Best Outcome You Can Give (5)
    The Days of Being in a Fake Marriage with the CEO
    Urban · Aromatic Peach Blossoms
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  • Rose_Patrona
    Rose_Patrona3yr
    Commented

    You have improve your grammer author. If you feel like idea is getting struck while thinking grammar. Then, after writing the chapter read the content. You can grasp some mistakes yourself.

    Ch 38 Luke's confession
    The Tyrant Gentle Husband
    Urban · Hana_Frederica
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