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PureCrow5dCommentedIs it not his sister in law
"Let's go to the dining room," Azaroth said, tugging on her hand, "Come on, Aunt Grayfia,"- PureCrow30dCommented
Do u know how much work goes into approving anything for a government department. I’m a designer and I’m busy with cloths for our airports (South Africa) and it’s takes months just to approve a shirt. Imagine a robot
"Seven huh guess I'm not sleeping tonight but at least I can finish Chappie by that time." With a deadline in mind, I sent her a thank you message before tossing the phone back into my bag. - PureCrow30dCommented
If he can mimic a cartoon (Naruto) can’t he just watch YouTube videos
I visited dojos and learned Karate, Kungfu, Krav Maga, Boxing, jiu-jitsu, Muay Thai and many more. If I wasn't watching them then I was practicing and mixing them choosing the moves I felt were the most useful. As I merged everything together seamlessly. - PureCrow1mthCommented
Made her mad
His arch-enemy, Morgan Le Fay used to use something similar but that technique had downsides too. Unlike Integration which Orion uses here, Morgan's technique was not that suitable. She too used to absorb the live force of other magical creatures, but mainly witches and wizards to grow her own power. But that way of getting stronger is extremely dark and ultimately makes her mad. - PureCrow1mthCommented
U over use I’s
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hot as flowing magma
And don't think that you can just put on the blanket because she also gonna stop the fan or AC, making sure its hot flowing magma inside your room. - PureCrow2mthCommented
More like doesn’t use magic
If I have to give you an example consider Thor from Avengers. Fictional character it may be but the rules of law apply to him as well. As you already know Thor doesn't have magic. But he can still control thunder and that too to an absurd degree. So much so that people started to call him the god of thunder. - PureCrow2mthCommented
Micheal got the technology from the devils to reincarnate humans into angels after the peace meeting One of the reasons that the angel faction wanted peace because of how hard it was for them to reproduce etc
Michael explains with serenity. "You have the chance to be the first to reincarnate as an angel. It will be a new journey, away from earthly conflicts and dogmas. Do you accept this opportunity?" - PureCrow2mthReplied to A_Real_Werewolf234
No he isn’t even the spar
Riser tried to do the same, but Rias shot him down and refused to even talk to him. That angered the Phenex heir, but his brother Ruvel pulled him along with the rest of the family. But, once the mansion was truly empty, Romonus walked toward Rias. - PureCrow2mthCommented
Made out of demonic energy doesn’t sound right. Maybe say enhanced with demonic energy
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Foot ball not rugby
He heard that this school placed great importance on the rugby league. Leading the team to the school league championship would earn a substantial scholarship. - PureCrow6mthCommented
His seems to be becoming a rabbit dog
The dragon fell in silence as he could see how his eyes were so dark, like a bottomless abyss. She could imagine how someone who had made him angry would be troubled and targeted by him, latched tightly until that person died. - PureCrow6mthCommented
He could have dropped the ball in a shadow and teleported it away
"200.79 meters, I guess that's all of you." the hobo man said while nodding a bit. After hearing that, Kurayami went to the sideline to join the other students. - PureCrow6mthCommented
Maybe u should say density of demonic power not quantity
Yes, the amount of his Demonic Power would no longer be bound by birth. - PureCrow7mthCommented
Didn’ he protect Harry because he owed Harry’ father a blood debts or something
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All devils where at least well off none were poor in the book
Most of them weren't rich; even some nobles were poor. - PureCrow8mthReplied to UthredofBebbanburg
I don’ think the author did any research
So yes.. After today the safest thing is that if you do not have support one day you can simply wake up with a dagger in the middle of your chest. And if he does not accept, he does not doubt that his life will be in danger by throwing him to the front to bear all the consequences of breaking the pact between families. - PureCrow8mthCommented
I think Loki is oden brother and he’l is his daug hter
"One of my sons is being an ass. Broke out Fenrir from his prison. We don't know if he had outside help or something. But the people of Asgard are pointing towards your group, which is stupid." Odin already trusts them. Mordred and Ise are his proteges. - PureCrow8mthPosted
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Spelling mistake: framing not flaming
To complete the look was a half mask that covered my upper face, flaming it perfectly. The eye holes glowed a soft even yellow.