Ellorando
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Ellorando3yrCommented"none of you any harm", don't get it
"That is pretty much the crux of what I'm saying, yes," Zetuo responded, his voice as steady and calm as ever, making it hard for Minato to pick out any form of lies. "I mean none of you any harm, have no way back, and would LOVE some assistance if you could spare some."- Ellorando3yrCommented
"won't" ,not "wont"
"Alright, I'm ready. Bring it on." Zetuo wrapped a bit of the end around his hand, ready to utilize it at a moments notice. "That old man wont get the better of me this time." - Ellorando3yrCommented
"couldn't", not "couldnt"
Inota had seen what kind of situations Zetuo's luck had put him through and the danger he brought everywhere he went. Though it was rather hard to believe that rotten luck could cause such severe, life threatening scenarios, this kid was an anomaly that could bring about problems at the drop of a hat. While he believed the kid himself harbored no I'll intent, the same couldnt be said about the bad luck which caused stuff to happen without discrimination. - Ellorando3yrCommented
"wasn't", not wasnt
Perhaps the most noticeable thing about the youth however were the countless scars that ran the length of his arms, legs, and a much smaller scars lining parts of his face. He wasnt sure what had caused all of them, but he reckoned that each one had its own story to tell. - Ellorando3yrCommented
"didn't", not didnt
From a curiosity to a possible suspect for the chaotic barrier, the child that the Anbu had captured was looking more and more suspicious with each passing second. Being unable to know if the youth did or didnt cause the malfunction, Hiruzen was forced to be wary and would most likely have to be much harder on the individual then he cared to be. While he wasn't going to outright torture the boy for information, he didnt plan to cut him any slack. Putting the whole Village at risk was just something he couldnt abide. - Ellorando3yrCommented
very weird way to frame internal dialog
(("This guy could be trouble,")) Zetuo thought as he moved his weird shackles into a spot where he could freely swing should the need arise. (("Trained veterans always give off a different vibe. This guy isnt someone I stand a chance against, let alone escape from. I'll have to plan the next move carefully.")) - Ellorando3yrCommented
"couldn't'', not "couldnt"
Jizuna couldnt so much as speak, his brain momentarily stalled as the ripples continued. Even as the two individuals standing beside him began to take action, calling out to the group of five perched on the second floor landing, he was unable to process the current series of events. It was all happening much too fast and too abruptly for him to take any cognitive action against the current predicament, his own body refusing to budge an inch. - Ellorando3yrCommented
"turn",not "Uturn"
The first one was to make a Uturn and double back, using the rain as a sort of cover to slip by them. The chance of success was a low medium to a small high. This option allowed him to shake his pursuers while simultaneously heading home. It was a tempting option but he ruled it out after a quick debate. He didn't want to take the risk of running into them nor take the risk of them noticing and following him back to his house. - Ellorando3yrCommented
Why Iron armour seal is there? It's should be tightly guarded in Kumo.
Whilst most of the scrolls were regretfully not Uzumaki, but rather, unique Kumo fuinjutsu, such as the Iron armour seal, used to seal away the eight tails. - Ellorando3yrCommented
"would not reveal" you mean
Well, Mizuki had a plan for that too, although he would reveal that until later.