LittleRedsWolf
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LittleRedsWolf2hCommentedThe raccoon's cries formed a grim symphony that seemed to resonate with the High Evolutionary's sense of purpose. To him, this was not just necessary but a gratifying step towards the culmination of his evolutionary ideals, a sacrifice at the altar of progress and perfection.- LittleRedsWolf5hReplied to Roger_XD
You're doing well. Keep at it.
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Nothing to apologize for, you're doing well.
Chapter 2.Lich - LittleRedsWolf1dReplied to Sicklil
He needs to..
Attribute Points: 3 - LittleRedsWolf1dCommented
3-4 what?
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[New special type of knowledge accquired:Magic and Mana,Holy Energy,Undead Energy] - LittleRedsWolf1dCommented
doesn't see me, does he?
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piled themselves together *
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The wolves immediately surrounded the knight,prepating to pounced at him. - LittleRedsWolf1dCommented
Those wolves *
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12 wolves, one of which has a larger body.
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This paragraph doesn't read well. If you read it out loud, your brain will recognize what is wrong. Also, ensure you have a space after periods.
It fits perfectly and offers better protection against its internal structures.Although It makes some other features unable to be activated,currently those features are damaged and broken.So the machine put on the armor and buried the dead human. - LittleRedsWolf1dCommented
I would take a look at your chapter, some word are capitalized when they shouldn't be, and others should be capitalized. Grammerly is a helpful tool to use.
Chapter 2.Lich - LittleRedsWolf1dCommented
It seems like this is the end*
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but was finally knocked down*
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fall down*
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rubble *
This paragraph has been deleted. - LittleRedsWolf2dCommented"Whole fleets of Hutt ships, blasted to smithereens!" he exclaimed, slamming his hand down for emphasis, causing glasses to rattle. "Makes ya think twice 'bout crossing Star-Lord, it does."
- LittleRedsWolf7dCommentedCh 22 This is also within your calculations