The amount of grammar mistakes. 🤦🏻‍♂️, pls get an editing software ( there’s a lot of free ones) . It really throws me off trying to understand what’s intended from what’s written.

The premise is good and I he system seems decent too but the speed of plot advancement and the irrelevance of cultivation throws you off. There’s no political intrigue. It’s more of a action cultivation novel where the mc is an emperor. The worst is the inconsistency in translation, which ranges from names of the empires, cultivation levels, characters and more. Even the mc’s name has a George in it at one point for some reason. In conclusion, even if the plot is decent with potential, the translation leaves it abysmal to read.

@author This book is so good. But there’s a lot of grammatical errors. It could be solved if you had grammarly or an editor, and would improve the quality of the writing drastically.

Which country is this black palace from ?

I don’t mean the sound rude but I really like the story and think you’re doing an excellent job with the plot so far so I hope you take my advice. Find an editor or something like Grammarly Pro. There’s spelling errors and repeated and rephrased sentences that reduce the overall quality of the work and the story content conveyed. It is my belief that It would increase the quality of your writing if you can address these things.

The Illuminati would’ve hit better. I’m not loving illuminatos

It’s more likely to be plot armor. The fool path’s authority has fate and spirit related stuff so it’s probably influencing lumian. And he probably needs it since he’s in the crosshairs of an outer god.

I think that’s more for ritual than acting. Klein didn’t have to do ritual for ancient scholar potion but still had to act to digest didnt he ?

I don’t it’s the beyonder part alone. Ut might have to do with the fool’s symbol protecting him too. Aurore is a sequence 7 and yet, she doesn’t remember so I’m inclined to think it’s Klein’s influence along with being beyonder that let him remember this time. It might also be why Fors can’t interfere, she might become part of the loop is she invokved herself directly.

True. It’s seems unlikely he ll become a red priest, considering the ritual requirements of the path. Just to become a sequence 4, he has to raise around 30 trustworthy subordinates. With Klein asleep, I don’t see him pulling it off. The apotheosis ritual is even more insane. And we have had a war already and the remaining gods aren’t too much in disunity so a continent level war seems even more unlikely.

Yeah, but I’m also wondering where Audrey is. How is Mr.fool’s superfan not involved in the plan. Or have they decided after a meeting or something taht Fors is the best mentor.

I think it might not sonic booms. Rather the whoosh sound. I don’t think a sequence 9 would be able to break the sound barrier.

I think the uncommon pathways might non- blasphemy slate pathways and also non divine pathways. meaning you reach angel at max and not reach god level. Or some kind debilitation. The mixing of pathways sounds interesting but it’s highly likely to turn someone into a monster, also, they would still be part of the 22 wouldn’t they?

I think she only mentioned one sequence 0 - red priest. And as for how she knew bout the hunter, it’ possibly through Lucian’s description and divination.

Yeah. especially when he saw Klein. Even high sequence fate path beyonders didn’ want to see Klein.

But I think aurore is likely sequence 9 or 8. we don’t know her pathway, so we can’t make guesses on her knowledge of acting method. But I’ glad they finally brought up Beyonder.

I’m still not sure on how aurore is a transmigrator. Is she was, wouldn’t she have ties to sefirah castle ?

I’m confused how a new path could exist. Don’t all paths originate from the original creator ? And since he awakened on earth, shouldn’t he have possessed all the paths ?

Is this the western continent. The parts blocked off by fog. It makes sense if this is this was formerly France

What ? I thought John would help cure the MC. Since even he can’t do it, is the Mc doomed to be a demon that hungers after magical energy ?