Hi when are you going to update again

Please Update waiting for next chapter

hi can you share raw link or raw name

don't think she deserves to die.

Save her

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Hannah and susan bones where both in hufflepuff

Also he should steal all the deathly hallows mainly getting back his invisibility clock as it will be most useful to him.

He should get revenge against dark families by robbing them.

Please update

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Please do not add the plot where he tells future of naruto world to others.

Don't give him power make him do hard work i bored of how easily mc become OP in many novels

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Its a good story few spelling and grammatical errors othewise writing quality is also great . I like the character who think things through .

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Don't make him beat people up otherwise he will not be able to stay low profile and would do same thing as original fang yuan does.