Like reading, anime, fishing and working.
Apparently physical fitness is considered non-essential to mages. Why have strength to lift more than a quill and more stamina than walking a flight stairs when you have magic? Stupid, should be integrated into mage training to have a stout body, even if they aren't able to use combat power.
...... To bad his intelligence stat doesn't help in life or the game. Still a lackluster mc. Side note from the beginning, how does a guy live in the rural area of Pennsylvania, USA and not own a gun? Way to skiddish to be in them parts, more believable if he was in a city and feared guns than a country boy......
Institute guild contribution points and credits in exchange for items. Put them all in a guild storage and make everyone pay for the goods they want, stop spoon feeding all these people...... Also need to define power levels. All the legendary beasts must be garbage, too weak for a legendary title. The novel was great up until the development of the guild, now it midline.
"One of the knights of his mouth and said" ........ Please fix some of the blatant grammar issues, I like the story but the grammar seems to be getting worse as the story progresses. It really takes away from it when I have to stop several times and figure out the sentence structure or words that are wrong or missing.
Mc is a bit to forgiving, needs to at least give a thump every once in awhile when some really angers him. Instead of saying Eisen is scary because he gets angry and talks severely at his current target, how about actually giving them a reason to believe he is fearsome?
The story is well designed as far as I have read, the grammar and structuring need some serious work, and the character creation is a nice change from a mc that is always stupidly righteous.
Good story so far, why does he agree to everything this gold dragon assigns? 1st test was do or get catered. 2nd test he gets some experience with his skills, which It sounds like he could have done on his own anyway. 3rd test? And what is the benefit of even being a champion, except having the honor of jumping to when a dragon tells him something? Just curious where this will lead or why?
Alternate character pov takes away from the story in my opinion. Also not to tripe on the way you portray romance in the novel, but it is never as straight forward as this in any novel or life. Just my opinion though. The overall story has an laid back design and descent mc internal dialog.