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LordMyth

LordMyth

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  • LordMyth
    LordMyth11d
    Commented

    Apparently physical fitness is considered non-essential to mages. Why have strength to lift more than a quill and more stamina than walking a flight stairs when you have magic? Stupid, should be integrated into mage training to have a stout body, even if they aren't able to use combat power.

    Ch 69 Fatal Negligence
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    Assassin's Chronicle
    Fantasy · Hit the Southern Wall
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  • LordMyth
    LordMyth14d
    Commented

    ...... To bad his intelligence stat doesn't help in life or the game. Still a lackluster mc. Side note from the beginning, how does a guy live in the rural area of Pennsylvania, USA and not own a gun? Way to skiddish to be in them parts, more believable if he was in a city and feared guns than a country boy......

    Ch 23 Keep On Fighting!
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    Rise of The Undead Legion
    Video Games · Biako
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  • LordMyth
    LordMyth15d
    Commented

    I think a good question would be, why is there venom in his body? Is he some spider or snake?

    Ch 98 Crisis and Secret Martial Arts 2
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    Mystical Journey
    Fantasy · Get Lost
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  • LordMyth
    LordMyth23d
    Commented

    Institute guild contribution points and credits in exchange for items. Put them all in a guild storage and make everyone pay for the goods they want, stop spoon feeding all these people...... Also need to define power levels. All the legendary beasts must be garbage, too weak for a legendary title. The novel was great up until the development of the guild, now it midline.

    Ch 85 Victory
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    Phoenix Phire
    Video Games · BotwaCazador
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  • LordMyth
    LordMyth30d
    Commented

    "One of the knights of his mouth and said" ........ Please fix some of the blatant grammar issues, I like the story but the grammar seems to be getting worse as the story progresses. It really takes away from it when I have to stop several times and figure out the sentence structure or words that are wrong or missing.

    Ch 125 Chain Quest: Knocking out the guards
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    The Evolution of a Goblin to the Peak
    Fantasy · DonnEll
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  • LordMyth
    LordMyth1mth
    Commented

    Please fix the titles. Entry level mage and high level magic apprentice or mage? Most of the pairings in prior chapters don't make any sense and the correlating power to level could help with being broken down a little to explain how they all relate.

    Ch 24 An Awkward Outcome
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    Assassin's Chronicle
    Fantasy · Hit the Southern Wall
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  • LordMyth
    LordMyth1mth
    Commented

    Mc is a bit to forgiving, needs to at least give a thump every once in awhile when some really angers him. Instead of saying Eisen is scary because he gets angry and talks severely at his current target, how about actually giving them a reason to believe he is fearsome?

    Ch 151 Forgiveness
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    Spending My Retirement In A Game
    Video Games · DiceVR
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  • LordMyth
    LordMyth1mth
    Commented

    Why wouldn't he make the wheels and axles out of metal? As well as add some shock absorption and maybe use some bearings on the axels, with king pins and tie rods to connect the wheels for better steering?

    Ch 80 Craftsman's Carriage
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    Spending My Retirement In A Game
    Video Games · DiceVR
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  • LordMyth
    LordMyth1mth
    Posted

    The story is well designed as far as I have read, the grammar and structuring need some serious work, and the character creation is a nice change from a mc that is always stupidly righteous.

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    Necron: The Legend Of Rezar DeathWind
    Video Games · Anone
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  • LordMyth
    LordMyth1mth
    Commented

    Good story so far, why does he agree to everything this gold dragon assigns? 1st test was do or get catered. 2nd test he gets some experience with his skills, which It sounds like he could have done on his own anyway. 3rd test? And what is the benefit of even being a champion, except having the honor of jumping to when a dragon tells him something? Just curious where this will lead or why?

    Ch 65 Living Machine
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    Spending My Retirement In A Game
    Video Games · DiceVR
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  • LordMyth
    LordMyth1mth
    Commented

    Alternate character pov takes away from the story in my opinion. Also not to tripe on the way you portray romance in the novel, but it is never as straight forward as this in any novel or life. Just my opinion though. The overall story has an laid back design and descent mc internal dialog.

    Ch 12 Mother
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    "Peaceful" Life in a Different World
    Fantasy · D_EIRIC
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  • LordMyth
    LordMyth1mth
    Commented

    Personally, I do not mind a weeks wait for well written chapters and a good story. No comparison to books with 2 chapters a a ay and terrible grammer.

    Ch 418 Final Preparations
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    Paragon of Destruction
    Fantasy · TomVanDyke
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  • LordMyth
    LordMyth1mth
    Commented

    Do "This" okay. Do "that" okay. Now jump, okay. Why question anything......

    Ch 17 Communing
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    Silverhart Online
    Video Games · redmitte2x
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  • LordMyth
    LordMyth1mth
    Replied to kuokyo

    My thoughts on the matter

    Ch 10 Boss Fight
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    Silverhart Online
    Video Games · redmitte2x
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  • LordMyth
    LordMyth1mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

    Ch 1 The Academy
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    Paragon of Destruction
    Fantasy · TomVanDyke
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  • LordMyth
    LordMyth1mth
    Commented

    What ever happened to gathering more divine veins?

    Ch 619 Disciple (2)
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    Way of the Devil
    Eastern Fantasy · Get Lost
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  • LordMyth
    LordMyth1mth
    Replied to LordMyth

    Keep up the good work, this is one of my favorite stories now.

    Ch 103 Visiting Cluster 1
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    The Evolution of a Goblin to the Peak
    Fantasy · DonnEll
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  • LordMyth
    LordMyth1mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

    Ch 103 Visiting Cluster 1
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    The Evolution of a Goblin to the Peak
    Fantasy · DonnEll
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  • LordMyth
    LordMyth1mth
    Commented

    Yup Bryan is one of the characters that you will never again take for a task involving common sense or stealth. Open field battles only......

    Ch 60 Meeting Lumilia
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    The Evolution of a Goblin to the Peak
    Fantasy · DonnEll
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  • LordMyth
    LordMyth1mth
    Commented

    Please mature these characters a bit more. They are supposed to be 20 - 24 years old and survived multiple battles. They shouldn't be half as naieve as they are portraid.

    Ch 40 Grimm’s Team Reunited
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    A Sorcerer's Journey
    Fantasy · Flying White Egrets
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