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I HATE HAREMS. I am a firm believer of a single dao companion.

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  • NegativeBlack
    NegativeBlack1yr
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    Thanks for the chapter! Don't forget that there is a dwemer lexicon underneath Riften containing knowledge on dwemer smithing techniques.

    Ch 91 Assembling the Team
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  • NegativeBlack
    NegativeBlack1yr
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    Thanks for the chapter! Maybe Sanguine will use Harkon's soul as a piñata. Sanguine is one of the most dangerous Daedra in Elder Scrolls not including his Satan motif. He represents stagnation and is a major threat to the mortals development.

    Ch 83 Out of the frying pan...
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  • NegativeBlack
    NegativeBlack1yr
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    Also remembered that as far as building a plane of Oblivion needs alot of power and certain secrets that only Daedra are privy to but Mehrunes Dagon was kind enough to write it down. That surviving page of the Mysterium Xarxes might be a big help. You know if you can ignore the self praise and bs-ing he wrote along with the knowledge of crafting a pocket of Oblivion.

    Ch 77 The Choice
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  • NegativeBlack
    NegativeBlack1yr
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    Thanks for the chapter! I was worried about ya for a second there. Hope everything goes well. As a note, all souls used from soul gems enter through the Soul Cairn including white souls. If going with the vampire option is the best choice then the cure will be equally difficult. Since Molag Bal has dominion over the species getting a soul returned would require equal level backing.

    Ch 77 The Choice
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  • NegativeBlack
    NegativeBlack1yr
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    Thanks for the chapter! Since everyone else has given input on the Vampire then I'll talk about the Ideal Masters. Their bodies haven't been stated before except for Battlespire. The crystals should be something like a conduit for communication while they hide behind that vortex in the sky. The best way to deal with them is trade. Every high level necromancer is closer to a successful ruthless merchant than a scholary wizard.

    Ch 76 Back to the Castle
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  • NegativeBlack
    NegativeBlack1yr
    Replied to Pepey_LePew

    Thanks for the reply. I had to think alot about what ways to improve a human body. The conclusion I came to was that the entire body would have to be worked on from the ground up. Denser bones and simple organ improvements is the easiest. Like a better liver to eliminate toxins.

    Ch 69 Meeting of the Minions
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  • NegativeBlack
    NegativeBlack1yr
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    Thanks for the chapter! Denser bones are also a major factor in an increase to strength. Extra organs should also be considered.

    Ch 69 Meeting of the Minions
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  • NegativeBlack
    NegativeBlack1yr
    Replied to kedabe

    It might be the day since it would be no different from our sun. You can only see the light of the sun during the day but the other stars are still there.

    Ch 68 Armed and Dangerous
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  • NegativeBlack
    NegativeBlack1yr
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    Thanks for the chapter! So Nirn and the space around it is basically a VERY large pocket space in Oblivion. The stars and the sun are literal holes in that space. As for the location of Aetherius it is hard to describe for me. It's outside surrounding Oblivion and somehow close to Mundus. It's only separated by the Dreamscape that acts as a film wrapped around Mundus. It's easier to think Aetherius as an endless white space and the Aurbus or Mundus (I still forget which) is this giant colorful wheel in that space. Also if MC's magic is going to be stronger in due to the connection to Aetherius then it will be during the day because obviously the GIANT HOLE in the sky.

    Ch 68 Armed and Dangerous
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  • NegativeBlack
    NegativeBlack1yr
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    Thanks for the chapter! If using soil and bits of metal for the creation of mana stones determine the amount stored why not gems? I was also curious in how you would space the story with the dlcs. There's no telling how long or when Volkhair or whatever will enact his plan or when the first dragonborn will make his move.

    Ch 63 Hall of the Vigilant
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  • NegativeBlack
    NegativeBlack1yr
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    Thanks for the chapter! Still want doubles. If MC intends to restore the snow elves he would still need the reference from the last snow elf. Also I always assumed the heart scale would be similar to a reverse scale on a dragon.

    Ch 62 Little experiments
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  • NegativeBlack
    NegativeBlack1yr
    Replied to Pepey_LePew

    It's cool. Also on the topic of political intrigue when writing it remember It's all about interests and desires. They have either or both and the plans they make to obtain them can be simple. Think of it as building the world is building a house and an evil scheme requires knowing every brick. When the villan enacts that plan they take it apart brick by brick. If you want headache inducing intrigue read Kingdoms and Bloodlines. That made Three Kingdoms look easy.

    Ch 57 Getting to the party
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  • NegativeBlack
    NegativeBlack1yr
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    Thanks for the chapter! So no doubles?

    Ch 57 Getting to the party
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  • NegativeBlack
    NegativeBlack1yr
    Replied to Pepey_LePew

    Yes thank you for the answer! I look forward to the next chapter and I hope its a double release at least once at the end of every month.

    Ch 55 The Dragonborn
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  • NegativeBlack
    NegativeBlack1yr
    Replied to Mr_XVL

    I know that I'm asking if leveling OTHER SKILLS will level him up. Like mastering all magic skills will increase his mana pool and mastering One handed will increase stamina.

    Ch 55 The Dragonborn
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  • NegativeBlack
    NegativeBlack1yr
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    Thanks for the chapter! I have a lot of questions I saved up but I'll save them for later. My question is if mastering a skill essentially levels up the character then wouldn't the other skills do the same?

    Ch 55 The Dragonborn
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  • NegativeBlack
    NegativeBlack1yr
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    Thanks for the chapter! Re-reading chapters and I like the current story progress but I would like to see more Alteration spells and how you would incorporate the Oblivion Shield spells as well as see what you would do with the Equilibrium spell.

    Ch 54 What happened after next
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  • NegativeBlack
    NegativeBlack1yr
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    Thanks for the chapter! I've read the chapter and previous chapters a couple time and looked over Forsworn lore and come to the conclusion that building a kingdom is not realistic for them. They can't survive beyond forest-dwelling tribal state because their culture prevents them from moving past certain practices. Otherwise a very cool faction as they see the Daedra as more lessons to learn than objects of worship. As for quests it's hard to say since alot of Skyrim wasn't fully fleshed out unfortunately. Why not consider old quests from previous ES games and bring them to the current period.

    Ch 53 What happened next
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  • NegativeBlack
    NegativeBlack1yr
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    Thanks for the chapter! The description of the fight scenes was fine but you should add inner dialogue for the characters. Commentary during the fights like Naris describing how much stronger his opponent is and Dante's struggle with the keeper.

    Ch 51 Japhet's Folly Assault pt. 3
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  • NegativeBlack
    NegativeBlack2yr
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    I think that the skill chooses the owner would be better for story. I understand if it just goes to the closest individual but if someone with potential and sufficient mastery is picked it would make more sense. You could consider First Kill rules but that would be a little boring. The Oblivion fanfic I was telling you about was set that multiple skill masteries wouldn't work but a fusion used to create a new spell or attack would be possible. THANKS FOR THE CHAPTER! Can't wait for next week!

    Ch 46 Bar fight
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