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Glyster1yrReplied to machadogbcNot to dog on the FLs but 200 hundred chapters in their kinda just resource drains that lead on an air of “untouchability” even though they without prompt from the MC “offered themselves” which doesn’t obligate them to anything considering other than the first girl who genuinely likes the MC and has since they were on earth the other two were in distress but they just kinda play games and tease the MC and always try to have the upper hand instead of just saying “thanks for helping but I most definitely don’t want to sleep with you I just want your strength and all the free stuff you can give me” and to top it off they follow that stupid trope of all the females teaming up against the MC and the rather annoying part is the two who were just using it and maybe caught “feelings” try to screw with the first girls head and change her personality, after all that so far the female lead characters leave at least me with the feeling of “an untouchable rose eventually loses it appeal” almost like shonen harems but at least their you don’t have any expectation
- Glyster2yrReplied to May_xx
They explained it in the prologue it originally meant executioner but then its just became a generally deragatory term for trash people for some reason
There was no way that a prince like this boy could be a mangnani. - Glyster2yrReplied to Firepri
Spoiler: and i really mean spoiler the dude who dissapears that “billionaire” was the Old system holder he was supposed to seduce a married princess and some people intervened and made the Queen get sick right at the end of his mission and he got obliterated for it so the prologue lets you know theirs people who know about the systems on earth and shows you just how far the system goes
*Author's Note: If you haven't read the prologue in volume 0, I strongly urge you to. It's not only entertaining, but adds a lot of context to the story. Due to how Webnovel organizes chapters, clicking the read button skips it accidentally, which is why I posted this comment here. Trust me and read it. I guarantee you won't regret it! - Glyster3yrCommented
It should either be how could he when even ancient experts couldnt or why would he be able to to
Feng Yun tried to contact the sword and the next moment it appeared in Feng Yun's hand. It has changed from before, now it looked more smooth and sharp, there was no rust or any sign of damage. It looked newly made sword. Feng Yun examined the sword, but he did not find anything extraordinary only this sword sharper. Feng Yun knew that this was a mysterious weapon, even Zhou Sheng was unable to find out about this sword. So how can Feng Yun do that even ancient experts couldn't do it? - Glyster3yrReplied to Lord_Eternity
Atg? Whats that i feel dumb
Feng Yun tried to contact the sword and the next moment it appeared in Feng Yun's hand. It has changed from before, now it looked more smooth and sharp, there was no rust or any sign of damage. It looked newly made sword. Feng Yun examined the sword, but he did not find anything extraordinary only this sword sharper. Feng Yun knew that this was a mysterious weapon, even Zhou Sheng was unable to find out about this sword. So how can Feng Yun do that even ancient experts couldn't do it? - Glyster3yrCommented
Couple More combined words
And so the Child of Light’s lightelement education begins. How it willturn out tomorrow, we will soon find out. - Glyster3yrCommented
Also you can remove the word how from the line about females learing water magic instead of light
It turns out that 200 years ago when the two continents first collided, there were a lot of humans learning the light magic because light magic is the weakness the demon race. In the war, intermediate light element mage had two main functions, as intermediate light spells are capable of basic treatment of the injured and damaging the demon race. Light and darkness spells also had two other functions. But today, 200 years later, due to the peaceful 200 years without war, people are able to live peacefully. Thus light spells have slowly become entirely useless. In comparison to the practical water, fire, earth and wind spells, the light elementis fairly basic. Furthermore, in intermediate class light spells are almost entirely defensive or for healing purposes. So most people choose who favor being aggressive choose the water, fire, earth or windelement as their majorand although slightly inferior to light spells, water spells are also able to heal. However, due to water spells having offensive spells and defensive spells in a more even ratio, even the girls who want to learn how healing spells give up the light element in favor of the water element. Leaving only the peace-loving monks to choose the light elementas their major. - Glyster3yrCommented
Also theirs another couple combined words here
It turns out that 200 years ago when the two continents first collided, there were a lot of humans learning the light magic because light magic is the weakness the demon race. In the war, intermediate light element mage had two main functions, as intermediate light spells are capable of basic treatment of the injured and damaging the demon race. Light and darkness spells also had two other functions. But today, 200 years later, due to the peaceful 200 years without war, people are able to live peacefully. Thus light spells have slowly become entirely useless. In comparison to the practical water, fire, earth and wind spells, the light elementis fairly basic. Furthermore, in intermediate class light spells are almost entirely defensive or for healing purposes. So most people choose who favor being aggressive choose the water, fire, earth or windelement as their majorand although slightly inferior to light spells, water spells are also able to heal. However, due to water spells having offensive spells and defensive spells in a more even ratio, even the girls who want to learn how healing spells give up the light element in favor of the water element. Leaving only the peace-loving monks to choose the light elementas their major. - Glyster3yrReplied to Glyster
Sorry water fire earth but my points still their
It turns out that 200 years ago when the two continents first collided, there were a lot of humans learning the light magic because light magic is the weakness the demon race. In the war, intermediate light element mage had two main functions, as intermediate light spells are capable of basic treatment of the injured and damaging the demon race. Light and darkness spells also had two other functions. But today, 200 years later, due to the peaceful 200 years without war, people are able to live peacefully. Thus light spells have slowly become entirely useless. In comparison to the practical water, fire, earth and wind spells, the light elementis fairly basic. Furthermore, in intermediate class light spells are almost entirely defensive or for healing purposes. So most people choose who favor being aggressive choose the water, fire, earth or windelement as their majorand although slightly inferior to light spells, water spells are also able to heal. However, due to water spells having offensive spells and defensive spells in a more even ratio, even the girls who want to learn how healing spells give up the light element in favor of the water element. Leaving only the peace-loving monks to choose the light elementas their major. - Glyster3yrCommented
Also you can remove choose because just saying “the people who favor being aggresive pick the fire element” works for what your saying
It turns out that 200 years ago when the two continents first collided, there were a lot of humans learning the light magic because light magic is the weakness the demon race. In the war, intermediate light element mage had two main functions, as intermediate light spells are capable of basic treatment of the injured and damaging the demon race. Light and darkness spells also had two other functions. But today, 200 years later, due to the peaceful 200 years without war, people are able to live peacefully. Thus light spells have slowly become entirely useless. In comparison to the practical water, fire, earth and wind spells, the light elementis fairly basic. Furthermore, in intermediate class light spells are almost entirely defensive or for healing purposes. So most people choose who favor being aggressive choose the water, fire, earth or windelement as their majorand although slightly inferior to light spells, water spells are also able to heal. However, due to water spells having offensive spells and defensive spells in a more even ratio, even the girls who want to learn how healing spells give up the light element in favor of the water element. Leaving only the peace-loving monks to choose the light elementas their major. - Glyster3yrCommented
“element is” thats the only one here
It turns out that 200 years ago when the two continents first collided, there were a lot of humans learning the light magic because light magic is the weakness the demon race. In the war, intermediate light element mage had two main functions, as intermediate light spells are capable of basic treatment of the injured and damaging the demon race. Light and darkness spells also had two other functions. But today, 200 years later, due to the peaceful 200 years without war, people are able to live peacefully. Thus light spells have slowly become entirely useless. In comparison to the practical water, fire, earth and wind spells, the light elementis fairly basic. Furthermore, in intermediate class light spells are almost entirely defensive or for healing purposes. So most people choose who favor being aggressive choose the water, fire, earth or windelement as their majorand although slightly inferior to light spells, water spells are also able to heal. However, due to water spells having offensive spells and defensive spells in a more even ratio, even the girls who want to learn how healing spells give up the light element in favor of the water element. Leaving only the peace-loving monks to choose the light elementas their major. - Glyster3yrCommented
And here
“Did you know that in the whole kingdom those who choose the lightelement as their majorbesides the professionals are only monks who use it for treatment?” - Glyster3yrCommented
And here
When I registered, the old witch looked at me and said “You’re choosing the light elementas your major?” - Glyster3yrCommented
Here too
“Have all of students thought properly about what magic elementto choose?” - Glyster3yrCommented
And here
“Be quiet. The old witch is coming. (Of course, the old witch is our class’s teacher. The 50 year old fire elementadvanced mage, teacher Lin. She very strict and she matured into an unattractive woman. So me and my classmates gave her the nickname of ‘Old Witch’).” - Glyster3yrCommented
And here
“Come learn magic of the water elementwith me!”