Sorry this is the first time I reply 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

Your can take different bath from death mage . You can make much better story there's a lot of potential. you can even make it aromas and would be good or make anything different death mage. Don't take it the wrong way. I'm only crying because I care truly. 😭😭😭😭😭😭😘

Make sense . Cultivators never use arrows crossbows

I just gotten to know reading past the mother daughter killing. It made me feel frustrated. I thought you mean controlled by the knife or losing some kind of emotion don't know. but he somehow have feelings for Julie. Who wipe the floor with his sorry ass literally and he doesn't have any kind of emotion to this act actually he likes. not feeling somehow how we know he feel pain in his heart when he tries to escape after they figure out he is the killer and confront Julie I just can't continue Reading after I read this this kind of b******* no offence to the author but I'm really frustrated. you should use some kind of spaces to move the paragraphs because I'm using text to speech to listen to The story . And this is my first review on this site.