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WMaDvA13119hCommented...she knew HIM and the fact that HE was poisoned.
"Find out the evidence to set her free and also make all the preparations by tomorrow, she should be free and adopted under the Huo family..." His voice slightly trembled, he didn't know how come she knew her and the fact that she was poisoned.- WMaDvA1317dCommented
"served" not severed
Then, Mo Lingtan elegantly severed the wine in everyone glass. Long Xue was stunned seeing him serving the wine. - WMaDvA1317dCommented
If she becomes my wife...
"If she became my wife in the next 6 months, you will accept her." Mo Lingtan said. - WMaDvA1317dCommented
...Decide on what you want to do now....
"Good that you are here. Now go and handle your grandma and I want you to handle this issue, once for all. I can't take it anymore. Make your decision now what do you want?" Su Qianlian was very frustrated and couldn't handle the fight of grandmother and grandson fight anymore. - WMaDvA1317dCommented
...but she was determined not to eat... ~ I like the story but some of the grammar and syntax is hard to swallow. Hope you can do another round of editing please. ~
Mo family already tried everything, but she was in determination for not to eat anything. Therefore, frustratingly Su Qiaolian called Mo Lingtan, as in her opinion he was the culprit. - WMaDvA1317dCommented
... until he found the right girl.
Now, she had gone for the hunger strike and announced that she was not going to eat anything until Mo Lingtan wouldn't find a girl for him. - WMaDvA1317dCommented
...She had gone on hunger strike...
Now, she had gone for the hunger strike and announced that she was not going to eat anything until Mo Lingtan wouldn't find a girl for him. - WMaDvA1311mthCommented
But I 'OWE' you.
"But I own you. That's the least I should say. I don't know what I could do without you," said Hazel. - WMaDvA1312mthCommented
..."killing two birds with one stone."
" Don't cry. Let her come and let her get the attention for now, just a short time attention. But I'll make sure she dies together with her twin brother. We just need to think of another plan and kill the twins with one stone, killing two birds." Dal-Rae said to her daughter and touched her soft hair. - WMaDvA1313mthReplied to Rikky_Joy
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Prepare to drive to the airport now.
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Seeing his boss colder than usual...
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...since she fell in love with Mr....
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I will be 'extra' careful...
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repeated 3x...?
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Emma is Elizabeth? Pls clear up the names
Now, not only does Terrence have no talent, but he's also a cripple who needs a wheelchair after walking a few steps. It's no wonder a talented person like Elizabeth Thompson would not be interested in him! - WMaDvA1314mthCommented
--> probably his master was disgusted with his eyes.
"Is this okay with you?" Baishe asked since he did not get any response from his master. Probably his master was disgusting with his eyes. - WMaDvA1314mthCommented
--> and realized that the diamonds could move around.
That earing was very beautiful. It was the pearls with small red diamonds. Bai Xifeng took a look and realize the diamond since to move around. - WMaDvA1314mthCommented
She is dead.
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He didn't want to be left anymore.
"Master, I will be loyal to you. Don't leave me alone anymore." Baishe was about to cry. He did not want to leave out anymore.