CyclopsSlayer2
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Walking by one year is average, cruising, walking while holding on can start much earlier.
It depends entirely on how apocalyptic the end is. A slow slide into new normality, a bad idea. Does the world become a blasted and charred ruin? Borrow all you want
Like the little old lady with a coin purse the check-out line... LOL
You need to run? Then RUN! Brush your clothes off, stop to look around? Are you a complete idiot? It seems so...
Truck-kun just saying hello with a lil' kiss...
Changing the 'but' to 'as' makes the sentence work.
I was coming here to rage a bit about the shower... :)
dot-dot-dot dash-dash-dash dot-dot-dot
By my mysterious dot stealing art, MINE!
Yes, just what is 'normal. And as I said below, just how are they judged as normal from across a road?'
So, just how were his pupils seem from across a road and judged to be normal?
They were! Author/Editor needs better plotline tracking
Please, please, please... Indicate a POV change with some indicator, ***** or ===== or something. The change is clear here, but that isn't guaranteed.
I agree heartily with the previous commenter that the chapter break should have been before the last 3 paragraphs of the last chapter.
Really lets you see as well as read the story