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Lessen the info dump and don ’t beat around the bush a lot like describing the house and other stuff should not take too many chapters. Kinda feels you ’re going around in circles and this lowers the interest of your readers. Can’t avoid skipping chapters. Make more events happen to the MC so readers can connect more to him like release the songs already and pave the way to him giving concerts and all…
All good man. Just hoping to see a brutal MC(when needed) especially when his life is on the line as I’m getting tired of reading weakhearted and foolish ones. Other readers seem to have the same opinion with their liking the comment.
If it satisfies your curiousity as other readers appear to share the same sentiment with them liking the comment. Just hoping to see a brutal MC(when needed) especially if his life is on the line to teach others not to mess with him as I’m getting tired of reading other weakhearted and foolish ones.