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The world building is terrific, the story leads you where you don’t expect. However the MC’s depression arcs are killing a bit the tempo. Once is okay, but we get it again and again... Another minor complaint : world building of the dregs, those inconsistent numbers about liters and demography (just think about the number of corpses they get) are a little petpeaves for me. If it’s published in books i suggest to review this points a bit.
not sure you would want to work with a spectre that gives diarrhea
my dear uncle, I’m enjoying my vacations in the shadows of the pyramids. Here is a little memory. xoxo Mordret
It would be fun if the nightmare acknowledged the name. For instance in a memory made from one of its planks : ”coming from the ship Chain Breaker, baptized by the treacherous Lost from Light.”
that’s the flag of a broken ship. Sorry this novel makes me paranoid!
rule #1 of the nightmare : never disturb the beauty sleep of a dark tunnel.
Gloomy will be so gloomy to be back!
The Roaring Lion Strike style his first opponents used in dreamscape !
Surprise ! We’re not the Song by the way, just hoodloms of the neighbourhood. Attack !
dying is too mundane
feel the city breaking and everybody shakingand we’re staying alive, staying alive...
digging deeper his grave... That’s why you should keep silence when interrogated
captain Chucky