I keep wondering. if time is stopped in the world that he leaves why is it also written that time may very well pass by while he is off doing other missions/universe reclamation?

most of it has already been written but his best bet would have been orks or necrons considering neither have the potential to be taken over by chaos influence and both are in their own way extremely hard to get rid of.... or tyranids but that's a whole new scarey and should never be used unless a last resort like the universe is already ending kind of last resort :p

hold on what? In which chapter has it been revealed to others that John summons and controls people from his works? I thought that was still hidden from everyone??

I hope the MC just straight up roasts the family in front of the business world because honestly he shouldn't be okay in that situation considering barely anyone that supported him. And it would be funny especially since most of the guests appear to be business giants.

no doubt considering I never read the manga and watched just up to the androids saga. So my Dragonball knowledge is very little. Although series reference or episode reference would be appreciated. Would make your statement more intellectual rather than a priss 👍 Just some friendly advice ^-^

silly reasoning, but alright. Considering people only hide it because of how weak they are in their current state or it doesn't fit their norm but exceptions can be made. let's see how this progresses aye.

a lot better names out there too. I feel the disappointment in this chapter already

this is actually a pretty good pokemon ff. I wouldn't mind keeping an eye on this hopefully there will be consistency or at least updates if unavailable to post but the latter isn't entirely needed just nice.

how does a mask shift you into another race, or playing a melody make you go forward or backwards in time? ayyy we'll just chalk it up to magic.

Unless the MC can use an illusion on himself(and others) in the beginning stages I dont think the HP world would be good to go into. A good portion of the magical world is very against most magical creatures and they would likely classify him as such would they not? I mean look at how they interact with most others tolerates em but prefers not to deal with them. Plus they would certainly not teach anyone they couldn't brainwa-ahem I mean educate them on how to properly use magic and he appears in his late teens so he'd have to certainly navigate through a loot of potential trouble to even thrive in the magical world and gradually expand into the non-magical one. Then again I'm not a big HP fan so I could be oh so very wrong.

preferably I'd like to see this story use a less overused universe, there are plenty of nice ones for the MCs little "relaxing happy life" that would give him a breather and still progress moderately. but eh that's my own preference as seeing the same worlds in a bunch of other FFs gets quite old and cringe after a while.

a true bromance story ey?

+1

wouldn't mind seeing this one be rewritten

Voterat a bit childish of you to indulge in this bit of trolling no? 1. if you have an issue with this FF then that should be a good 30-40 percent of what's on here based on the content. As for your argument it has some merit yeah but at least it would be an outlet for those who have such desires no? not only that but so long as its not based on anyone it should be more or less acceptable, have a personal issue either deal with it or just leave this FF alone. either you have ill will towards the author or you are trying to be an attention hog. If the author is being ignorant or a troll themselves then leave it at least you tried. because forcing opinions and ideals on people is a horrible thing to do. you've said your opinion that should be all. don't be an a**hole

agreed on it needing editing. also find it hilarious that he says he'll be satisfied with one relationship, that ain't going to happen being a god-like immortal. really though I hope the author does give the mc at least 1 or 2 more romantic interests because if not then there is no point even having an unrequited love, it'd just be word count if that's the case.

better question. who said Fanfiction has to make sense. considering most of it is left to the whims of the author.

ahh. why not bring in 40k D:

Cool

yeah... when reading most of the sentences that doesn't make any sense i just mentally restructure it to make sense because its very unlikely this will be edited.