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Reading the chapters so far the story is good.... still i need at least 100 chapters to make a judgement

finally we will see more of hiruzen fujin shameless interactions xD cant wait for that

I actually enjoyed the dialogues more than the fights ... and I instead think it is your strong point... specially the old dialogues with hiruzen. i was laughing out loud each time I read them. keep your hard work .. you r doing such a good job 💪👍

people make cliffhangers at the end of each chapter... I make a complete cliffhanger arc ✅ we are not the same 😭

Fujin is like shadow feom eminence in shadow anime. He didn't want to die by a nuclear bomb.. so he became one himself.

you can sleep if you want we can always read the next chapter tomorrow... though the faster the better xD

i guess the old man isn't gonna retire yet

i wanted to see more into the hiruzen fujin funny interactions... I still have hope 😞

the perfect cliffhanger.. like... there is no cliffhanger that is more perfect than this.

bro author... just ignore all negative comments.. this is your story.. your own work and you r talented and really good at it. I hope you can keep up the good work. though everyone have a life...dont forget about your life, studies , career cauz no one will help you with that. You live of your job and nothing else...so prioritize that