it's a great story with awesome grammar and lovable characters reading it to its conclusion brought me immense joy and I recommend to at least try it.

c , ' 🐦🐔💀💀🐦ac' C 70

I normally don't write reviews but this piece of art deserves it. There is no unneeded harem there is deep knowledge about the actual lore and realistic character, world and story development. Interactions between characters feel real and alive. This story is in my top 3 fanfics I ever read and that in all the websites I read on. I hope and pray for more chapters, all in all thank you for this beautiful story. 👍👍👍

hey I'm not good in English so sorry if I sound rude in the next sentence. you don't calculate those numbers that way let's say you regen 0.01% per point and you have 100 points and you don't type in the calcuator 0.01% * 100 instead you use 0.01*100 because you don't want a percent of the hundred but you want to know the 100 multiplier of 0.01 and the % symbole is just that a symbol you don't want in you equation

hey quick question you Worte 0.1% per point and he has 140 point and 140*0.1 is 14 soo shoulnd he Regen 14% of max health per second?

no i copied the link on my computer abd filled it in and a website poped up that wanted me to buy archives or something

the link dosn´t work for me?

hey thanks for chapter and your a great author

nice chapter i can´t wait for more here are 2 stones I reserved for one of my storys that don't update daily :D

It really shows promise 10/10 would read more and the thing is I don't know who the goddess is whos powers he gets so every power is a nice surprise for me and that's nice too, i like the mc character and interactions cant say yet a lot for character development but i hope it will be as good as the other stuff, grammar is nice too so that's a thing and in the end just a nice review from me in hopes for more chapters

Is commenting on paragraphs with spelling mistakes helping anyhow and when yes will you fix them when we show you the mistakes? But if only story criticism is allowed it's fine too.

Thank you for the chapter (☞ﾟヮﾟ)☞☜(ﾟヮﾟ☜)

When I started to read this fanfiction I was kind of bummed how the author realized conversation flow and how he marked it but later in the story, he changed and improved it (it's still not perfect and lots of times there is too much of she said he said or equivalent, so my tip is to just start a conversation with she said to know who starts it between them and then just write he shouted or so when necessary ). The story is good and even if I think there is a lot of potential still there, I need to remember that it's only the beginning. The author still deserves a 5-star review. So in short in my opinion if the conversation flow is improved one of the biggest mistakes that in my opinion turns a lot of new readers away is fixed and I would love if you (the author) would go back to earlier chapters and overwork the old conversation flow to make make it easier for new readers to join and enjoy your work.

mhm next time i make such a comment i consider it as it seems it can be confusing

as a german myself i can confirm that i hated my time learning french even if I only learned for half a year and didn't retain anything so I pity you a lot dude

pls no

if you make an unbelivable harem plot i will report you for reader abuse

if you keep that quality up (and make no bad plot harem where every woman just wants to fuk the mc) then I guaranty that this fanfiction will be a hit I read the first time today und i will give you all 3 stones and will continue doing that for this quality

the classic blunder