Acrol

Not me reading this at 1am 💀

While I do think purpose is important, half of this chapter at most of the previous chapter have been repeating the same things: Sabrina and Melvin’s family

The gates*

This is like saying: he is rich due to his money. Maybe mentioning the business procured from academies or some specialization may be more fitting.

Barely*

He lacked points

Is this a pun? 👀

After gold coins, “mana stones” are…

I would use dashes here. -well you will fail anyway-…

This guy gotta chill out, when growing up gender is not a focus. Love the realist racism displayed by the way (strong emphasis on “realistic”)