ENDERMYSTERYGOD

Author, I'll give you some tips: 1. Make the MC have more problems, both emotionally and otherwise, and 2. Make the secondary characters important to the plot, just like One Punch Man.

Look, I found the story very interesting. I read it all, but as the first review said, this story gets very boring and repetitive without a fight.none and when there is Mc, he basically ends it in seconds, the ending was rubbish, I think in that part the author just wanted to finish the story There wasn't much action and when there was, except for the first 50 chapters, it was all meh, nobody cares, but I still liked the story except for the fact that there wasn't any fighting. no exploration of realms and other cool stuff like pill refinement artifact arrays and talismans after a time the author forgets said and makes his Afk system refine for him these things world building didn't have much very little interaction between characters and apart from that the ending was really horrible

thank you so much for the chapter keep it up Don't give up on your dreamsAlright author rest Be strong you will go far 

thank you so much for the chapter keep it up Don't give up on your dreamsAlright author rest Be strong you will go far 

thank you so much for the chapter keep it up Don't give up on your dreamsAlright author rest Be strong you will go far 

thank you so much for the chapter keep it up Don't give up on your dreamsAlright author rest Be strong you will go far 

thank you so much for the chapter keep it up Don't give up on your dreamsAlright author rest Be strong you will go far 

thank you so much for the chapter keep it up Don't give up on your dreamsAlright author rest Be strong you will go far 

thank you so much for the chapter keep it up Don't give up on your dreamsAlright author rest Be strong you will go far 

thank you so much for the chapter keep it up Don't give up on your dreamsAlright author rest Be strong you will go far