seanbest

+1

yes rewrite this story is one of the best I've read in quite a while but I can tell your attention is slipping and a rewrite may help you focus in the story more

+1

As long as it is good writing I support you, but please finish your story's I find the only thing worse than a bad story is an unfinished one.

thanks for the chapter been missing this

Don't be discouraged the recent chapters are a nice change of pace Keep up the good work

Please keep writing I enjoy the story

1 the story would not be complete without the wedding.

Thanks for the chapter and Don't let the negativity get to you.

Thanks for the chapter