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This story is very cheesy and cliche. The discussion between characters is very stilted and nonsensical. Its pretty much the same writing skill as a bulk of writers on here. It’s not one of the worst stories on here, but it’s no where near the best. I can say the idea was great but the execution was subpar.
Imma just hope you purposely said ‘Boruto’s dad’ just to get a rise out of the readers.
The MC doesnt really seem to have a reason or a motive for indiscriminately killing and raping, except for the fact that he finds it interesting. The part where he says he regrets being the one who started WW3 and trying to leave that situation to him then wanting to overturn the hero society and causing deaths just for the fun of it or cus he finds it interesting....??? That doesn’t really make any sense to me. I don’t see where him becoming a heroic villain is shown. He just seems like an OP Shigaraki w/o the mental instability and with assasination experience. Maybe if instead of ‘motivating’ the future heroes by killing and raping he could have cruelly killed those who ‘deserve it’. Like the corrupt heroes or those behind the original hosts’ fate or actual villains. I’ll admit that I didnt get far in the book but this is the impression i get so far. And it will be the farthest im going get into this book. Personally, it’s not for me.
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
I really love this story and I couldn’t wait for it to be updated. I came to reread the chapters, but found that they were deleted. Author-san it would really be helpful if you could tell us if you are discontinuing this story or just rewriting it. If it’s being discontinued please repost the chapters that were deleted, so that us the readers can have time to mourn. Any update would be good honestly. I think its best if you tell us what’s going on with the ff.
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