Overall a very good storyline. Loved the MC's development over the story, although didn't liked him being a dog for the CDs but all is well in the grand scheme.

Actually, I thought the hiding from O. Hali was nice touch, could nerf it slightly as Virf is part of Kuina's willpower and that she would have to use her 'mist' to create a area of willpower so she would seems as though she is hidden from enemies O. Haki only when they are in her mist? Just a suggestion :)

Thanks for the chapter !

Thanks Author for this, loved MAS no matter what, cause reading helps pulled me through my intern days so I really hope you continue MAS I will wait for the day to come no matter how long :)

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