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Garciadan9817dCommentedConfined to that room, the fat leech had no way of knowing what was going on inside her head, however, with full intentions to seduce Raven, Brenna was about to show him exactly what she had planned for the very next night.- Garciadan9830dCommented"Oh my~! I do not act cute. I am cuteness incarnate, you know?"
- Garciadan981mthCommented
Get back up and eat that horse.
"It's okay to be weak. Everyone starts small and everyone has to fall sometimes. What is important is to stand up and continue walking even when everything seems to be against you. Also, don't hesitate to talk to me. I am not smart like you or the boss. But I have the experience you two lack." - Garciadan982mthPosted
Overall, it was an excellent read. The grammar is excellent. The story follows our MC on his journey to become stronger through fights that lead him to the brink of death. You get a good feel for his character in the story, and the author does a good job of describing fights and other dramatic situations that will feel like fights. The main flaws are towards the end, where it feels slightly rushed, and a lack of relational development between characters with a few exceptions. This does not play out as a harem. The first 300+ chapters do not really show any signs of a harem, and it only kind of is touched on towards the end and established in the last few dozen chapters.
- Garciadan982mthReplied to That_Annoying_guy
For the most part, No. He does have a harem in what I consider the epilogue, but the story really follows his own journey. The relationships with others are not focused on.
"Hey, Ana, did you ever get around to confessing? Or did you just jump straight into doing the nasty with Atlas?" - Garciadan982mthCommented*Sorry, chief. It took a little to see through all that. But he burns! Oh, goddamn! HE BURNS!*
- Garciadan982mthCommented
Best girl is smug.
Mara and Karandiel glared at each other as they walked back to the city, all the while unaware of the slime smugly resting inside his shirt. - Garciadan982mthCommented"The other method is to teach me and make me your disciple. Everything that your disciple owns, you own, right?"
- Garciadan982mthCommented"Seriously! As soon as I take my eyes off you, you skedaddle right into the arms of death and give them a big, sloppy kiss! Can't you treasure yourself a little more?!"
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Intusive thoughts.
And even more worryingly, Ackster considered eating it. - Garciadan982mthCommented
I got a little emotional here. Best girl? is back.
Emotions once again overwhelmed Ackster after he picked Mio up and hugged the soft slime. First, his arm, enlightenment, bodily rebirth, updated status, and now Mio's return. - Garciadan982mthCommented
Mike Tyson style.
The bull's ears were much thinner and more flexible than the rest of the bull's skin. So, there was some hope that he could bite them off. - Garciadan982mthReplied to DaoistjgSy04
I think he will still gain more overall. Remember ,he gains every time while each girl only gains while he is with them. This way, the author can justify having the girls' power scale with the MC.
[Before you complain, this way, the ladies will gain even more than you do—this makes your heart lighter, right?] - Garciadan982mthCommented
She is calling in reinforcements.
"Fuck that priestess, make her a slave to your cock..." - Garciadan983mthCommented"Oh, crap I forgot the 'no homo.' You always gotta say 'no homo.' Otherwise, how does the Lord know you're not homo—not that there's anything wrong with it!