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Lillymoon4mthCommentedis it miles, Mary, mari. .. why does the director's name keep changing? If you need an editor i can help.I will even do it for free, just so the story remains consistent.
At that time, even the director of the advertising department, Meryl, would not be able to cover up for it ...- Lillymoon4mthCommented
i am really shocked with all the pronoun mistakes!
Hearing that, Vice - President li glanced at su Cai and chuckled,""There's no mistake. The president personally sent him." - Lillymoon5mthCommented
something tells me Joan is a spy, something is really suspicious about that woman.
Tom's shocked face mirrored the frustration churning through William. "But how…? How did they even know the arch existed, or what our next move would be?" - Lillymoon11mthCommented
umm, wonder if this new entity is a baby?!
"The light will weep with molten fury, a surrender shall awaken a new entity." - Lillymoon11mthCommented
For Eve's sake, I would be wary, especially when everyone in her past betrayed her, but then again, people can unexpectedly surprise you! Can't wait to see what happens!
A/N: Do you think Ophelia is an Ally or an enemy? :D - Lillymoon11mthCommented
the story wise, is actually pretty good. only suggestion I would advise is for you to get an editor for the mistakes (it will help the story out and keep the readers engaged). Just keep honing your craft and don't get discouraged by the negativity.
Ch 11 [S1] 011 Exposed Identity - Lillymoon1yrCommented
wait, wouldn't he see her covered in blood, since her clothes had blood on them too?!
Like a mouse trapped, she watch the Tiger come closer. Too close. Any closer and he will smell the blood. - Lillymoon1yrCommented
girl, you need to start putting the pieces together then you will realize they all are one in the same
Thus, in the next two games, Shi Yao spent one moment thinking that Legend was Mister Numbers, the next moment thinking that Legend was Lin Jiage, and the next moment, saying that her idol had wronged her, and the next moment that she had accidentally slandered him. - Lillymoon1yrCommented
they are all the same person, that's why they all are similar to you lol
So, her male God had gone from being like Mister Numbers to being like Lin Jiage? - Lillymoon1yrCommented
ohhh, but they are the same!!! can't wait to see his reaction when he finds out the truth
But for some reason, he found himself wishing that Big White Chubby was Soft Bun, and Soft Bun was Big White Chubby... - Lillymoon1yrCommented
I get a sense of foreshadowing. Curious if she is going to switch careers from actress to singer?!
Jiang Yuning had a beautiful dream that night. In her dream, she was holding a concert and the entire place was filled with more than ten thousand people. Lu Jingzhi was sitting at the main guest table and he was looking at her with a smile on his face. - Lillymoon2yrCommented
why do i suspect that auntie sarah might be a hunter?
"You didn't introduce your friend here, Julianne," Aunt Sarah finally looked at Roman. - Lillymoon2yrCommentedCh 1 One way to be welcomed: Punishment
- Lillymoon2yrCommentedCh 305 There's Someone I Like Now (2)
- Lillymoon2yrCommentedCh 231 You're My Girlfriend From Now On (3)
- Lillymoon2yrCommentedCh 186 His Future, Her Life (1)