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hi all, author here. just want to mention that updates will be irregular and likely in batches since I am working on this novel as a passion project and only upload when I think of it since I tend to forget, so some weeks might see no uploads or just one, whilst others might see multiple in a week like this 8 chapter batch release ^^ if there's questions about anything related to the novel let me know I reply when I see it
Author again. a final thing to add since the author’s notes have limited space. what did you all think of the small “relaxing” part at the end going over the view and showing the peaceful side of the world. i decided to add it in as a test and I’m curious if you all liked Reading that kind of thing in a cultivation novel. Opinions are welcome even if negative, It will help me learn towards the future what you, the readers like!
Author here, Please leave a paragraph comment if a sentence sounds weird or has spelling errors, I wrote this chapter very late at night so didn’t double check for corrections as i am very tired right now, hope you enjoy this final explanation chapter before the training and fighting kicks off!
As for walking in the air, Each element had their own way and advantages of doing it Untill they can Fly in the air Just from their cultivation realm. earth Element will make use of gravity, Space will make use Of bending space aka teleportation, Fire will use force like jetpacks Do to explain it very simply. water will condense the water particles in the air etc. But this will also be explained in a later chapter since it is not that relevant yet, But i dont mind sharing the info since you asked. i will make a small Part the cHapter taLk about the flying stuff to give you more clarity on this 🙃 look forWard to c16 In an hour or two! And i will use your suggestion on the Skills and markings for now until someone comments a diffirent option that gets more likes. I will leave previous chapters as they are
I haven’t explained too much in the novel about skills yet so i won’t go too much in depth Now, i will respond to your questions though. Light/life element is one and the same thing, It is more based on vitality than actual Sunlight which fits More into the fire element side in my opinion. so light will not or rarely be a solid form thing since i see it as a formless support type element. healing, illusions, messing with people’s vision, those types of things are more light element aswell as its the counter to darKness/death element which is more based on removing vitality like poison and stuff. so your idea with Making bows and arrows out of light is more going to be a space element thing...although, You will see next chapter what kind of skills mc will use ;) the next chapter will be An early boNus chapter in about an hour or two since i am typing it now. Most of your questions will probably be answered in that chapter since it goes more in depth On skills so if you still have questions i will answer them in that chapter. i will Keep the suggestions on the forming of his skill into objects and weapons and stuff in mind though and will think of how I can make use of something similar In the novel since i want everything to be balanced and based on logic 🙃
I want every member of the group to be weird in some way so I don’t plan to give his arm back for the time being since it allows for fun interactions and a unique mc compared to hundreds of other novels where they are all perfectly “normal” So i like having a blind guy and a one armed guy it keeps the story and interactions more interesting in my opinion. thanks for sharing your opinion though 🙃
As for the combat application, it cannot be used to remove weapons/Armor/storage rings etc since those are bound to the user using a drop of blood, or in the weapon’s case it is fIlled with the cultivator’s qi which Would make it too easy to be stolen otherwise. so the only practical use of the ability in fights would be as you said remove footing, or absorbing corpses to heal during battle. (In chapter 1 mc stopped bleeding from absorbing the Flesh of those three he killed. so it will mainly be used as insta heal mid battle and some rare cases of Removing footing. of course if you have ideas for other uses you can tell them since my imagination is limited. and other questions i will also try clearing up if you have them ^^ but the ability cannot remove weapons or treasures unless the owners have died but then it might be Easier just picking them up instead of eating and puking em out a Minute later.
Not a fan of the cliffhanger?
Author here! shameless 4.6 Since My updates are not 7+ per week and I’m not a native english speaker so my writing can sometimes have spelling Mistakes or weird sentences or have difficulty conveying emotions or facial expressions. I did put a lot of time in my worldbuilding though and made sure that everything in this Novel is built upon logic and I will continue trying to do so. So no Illogical plot armors or sudden event Saving the mc in a crucial moment. Everything will be built opon logic And i hope many see this as a fun thing whilst reading my novel. and if you ever happen to find a loophole or something doesn’t add up please leave a chapter comment or paragraph comment i Always look at every single one so Don’t hesitate to notify me if you feel it can be improved of if you find a flaw. This novel is not a fighting 24/7 type Cultivation novel where the mc runs into increasingly stronger opponents Without rest. i also try avoid typical “Arrogant young master” and other typical scenarios. Sorry for the long post, Please enjoy the novel since I plan to keep going for a long time. i will try to keep a daily upload Schedule using bonus chapters but during busy periods this number can go down to one a week minimum. Thanks for the support.