What is this?? Is this the same story or u posted it here by mistake??

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I know what i am about to say (write) is a dick move, but shouldnt u have took the chance to write chapter normally without Ubloadi g them then u will stock pile them till internet is back?? Hope it got fixed soon

WTF bro i was really looking For ur update u cant believe the amount of fanfic with Bad writing way and technique that Makes u understand shit Anyway ur fanfic is good and i will admit i was looking forward to R18 scene but i never asked for it i mean u r the author u decide how ur story goes at the end we r only allowed to comment and gives ouR opinion Plus there are feW stories that focus only on R18 so if u people want some R18 then go to those story because they really know how to make u more hornier But Not every story must be R18 guys By the way it doesnt mean that Becsuse only people who talks r horny THen all readers are it is just that most of us i believe prefer to remain silent and thats all

True the spider is one of the best spider/ marvel fanfiction out there

Depends r y sure have enough drive and motivation until u reach 15K?? If yes then wait if u r not sure then u better release it now or as long as u can wait Then release it to recieve motivation (or criticism) ur choice

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He wont come back Once ur drive is gone then it is gone

Ok i am not saying u think mudlims r terrorist or what not oR u dont respect our religion but we already have enough bad press if u know what i mean In non muslim country if u says u r a muslim then u R automatically r a terrorist so i am not saying to remove it but at least to not repeat it Like to tie muslims with terrorist really annoys me

Ok so 20% chapter and plot and 80% U being narcastic (not sure of the spelling but u being self centered boosting ur ego as comments on Ur fan fic) okay we got it u r great reduce Ur comments in the fsnfic and write the damn story

Ok thx for the chapter love ur work But him increasing gravity does increase an item weight thats true, but when u said that he increase his sword/fist before impact him increasing the item weight wont really matter ( unless its downward slash) because what matters during impact is the mass snd velocity (gravity dont manipulate mass but weight) so him decreasing his sword weight during swings is ok (but isnt really important i mean try to swing a 1 kg stick or 0.5 kg stick almost same speed, considering his strength doesnt matter really) so weight is Different than mass and mass is what we need in punching and slashes (thats why every punch from kilo kilo no mi and to ton no mi is powerful) the point is if he increased his sword weight for horizental slash it will simply disturb him without aiding him at all If it is diagonal then maybe ( but lets be real about something he need to increase gravity hundred of times around his sword to have noticable effect i mean most clashes doesnt depend on weapon weight but user strength , like lets be realistic zoro Attack power wont increase if his sword became 10 times heavier because he will still feel it weights like a feather if it was 20 kg or 200 kg (kg is a unit of mass not weight, weight unit is same as force Unit) bottom line he needs to lets say increase gravity 100 tImes to add little strength while that same 100 gravity will gives better result if used on opponents directly

Actually i Felt that the betrayal was too sudden and poorly done Aa for the punishment i felt it to be weird and overly cruel, i am not saying u shouldnt have done that or something I am just saying its overly cruel and robin involvement at the beginning is weird and one of the many reason why i feel it was poorly done I am not against the betrayel i just feel it was poorly executed and just for the record i am saying robin involvement is irrational because of her personality not because she is beautiful or shit

I do finf them entertainment

Welcome to my world (group assIgnment)

Well like first post said Islam is not a terrorism religious, like there is close to 2 billion muslims in the world so saying that 20 To 25 % of the world are terrorist is pushing it too far and we would have already won, besides Jehad is fighting to spread gods teaching its in no way bombing urself in a building full of civilian, in all of the wars muslim entered they only fight soliders snd if they won and take over the land they dont harm anyone unless he picks up his wespon to fight, and no children or women gets raped or killed at all, not like most soliders In some countries after battle

He probabely has 2 fake stick now

Stop saying handsome

Am i the only one who felt that the last part was not done propably, i mean you only wrote the conversation without the action, this gave me the feeling that it was skipped or it was unimportant, I feel you should have wrote their action to imphasize on its important

XP plus I like the novel the previous comment wasnt a complain or anything, just trying to help you to make sense of some people thought, By the way i fond invisibility as a strong super power + plus mind read, i mean to read your opponent mind In a fight to knoW his next move, plus being invisible allows him to defeat 99.99% of worlds population in 1 vs 1 fIght so hIs physical strength is average but his battle power is high