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DaoHeist1yrCommentedYes we know you’re a medical student stop flexing on us plebians
"I've got a gunshot wound between the left axilla and clavicle. The patient is alert and oriented. I got a blood pressure of 136 over 92 and a heart rate of 115," The doctor, who was the first one to see the prince at the entrance, reported.- DaoHeist2yrReplied to DaoHeist
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Everything else was great except for the character design. Maybe its just that I got used to reading protagonist who are perfect in every way possible in webnovels, but imo it just really makes the narrative tension bland if the protagonist is always right and everyone who opposes him is wrong, that the protagonist have the greatest power, and can achieve anything without a struggle. The only narrative tension I felt was when he fought a god that caused him to lose his village, separate him from his family, and seal himself somewhere for years. Everything else went slowly boring for me afterwards he broke the seal. Since he already attained the powers of god, and always act like he is in the moral high ground without the perspective of the opposing people who mostly act like a cut cardboard. Probably make the readers invested with the side characters and villains, and don’t make the protagonist right all the time, it could still be wholesome without him being an overpowered mary sue. It was pretty comedic and engaging at the start though, slightly better than most of the naruto fanfics in this app. Anyways, keep up the good work !
- DaoHeist2yrCommented
I gotchu
THROW ME AT STONES PLEASE! - DaoHeist2yrCommented
Sadge
~Do you have any idea how hard it is to see without seeing?~ Shisui muttered under his breath. - DaoHeist2yrCommented
💯💯
Shiroken laughed, "You cheeky boy, I won't tell you anymore unless you tell me who took your eye. Do you expect me to tell all my secrets to someone who still wants to bleed for the village that betrayed him in the first place? Learn to value yourself first, only then can you reach your full potential. Don't be a sheep, be a fox, a smart fox who makes his own decisions." - DaoHeist2yrReplied to MisterImmortal
Thats dope
A giant green translucent fiendish looking armour covered Shisui, but it was only half-developed as there were no legs. To Shiroken it was clear that Shisui needed a push, as he had seen Monari use a complete Susanoo. - DaoHeist2yrCommented
Omae wa mou shindeiru
Ten seconds passed and nothing happened. Shiroken angrily looked at them, "I'm sorry, was something supposed to happen? But you did attack me… If this is your choice, then FINE!" - DaoHeist2yrCommented
Its easy for Shiruken to say, he had powers; Good men can’t do anything against tyranny if they don’t have enough power, especially if they are controlled by fear and lack unity against said tyrant. Those who begin to oppose tyranny recklessly will only become martyrs and nothing else.
"Remember, the only thing necessary for the triumph of evil is for good men to do nothing." He scolded them. - DaoHeist2yrCommentedZabuza threw it at Gato's face, injuring him. Gato for the first time felt Money being painful. He cried, "No, you can't do that. I paid you to protect me. If you do this... Nobody will ever hire you."
- DaoHeist2yrReplied to MisterImmortal
Gato had two main bodyguards, Zōri and Waraji, although they were not ninjas they were still capable of massacring citizens through kenjutsu and Iaijutsu though 🤷♂️.
Shiroken nodded, "Of course we should. But, you should only help people who want to help themselves. Look at everyone here, there are about a thousand people, even if they pick up their utensils and fight they can win. But, they don't." - DaoHeist2yrCommented
Sussy
Naruto angrily threw Kakashi's arms away from over his shoulder. Then he raged, "NO! HOW DARE YOU! Y-You... NO! He just gave me ramen to eat." - DaoHeist2yrCommented
What’s the need to attack though i thought Danzo was a calm, cold, and collected individual…. that aint Danzo he wouldnt act rashly and wage war against something he read as in the same terms of overpowered.
But Hiruzen denied, "No, you need to form official good ties with the country. The Elder council and Danzo foolishly suggested that we attack the country and take over it." - DaoHeist2yrCommented
Very wholesome
Everyone saw this kind gesture, and some fell in love with their handsome Supreme Daimyo that day. But Shiroken's work was not finished. Saiken was still yet to be found. However, just then he got a letter from Monari. - DaoHeist2yrReplied to Dragonised101
I hope not, I hate love triangle tropes It gets in the way of the protagonists power fantasy like a leech sucking blood.
"Only together we can be of any challenge to him, come, and let's join hands everyone," Mei advised them. - DaoHeist2yrCommented
If its inconsequential then why do 50% of them still do it?
About 50 per cent of the answers were No. Some even added a remark, saying the mission is supreme. Each one of them failed their test. - DaoHeist2yrCommented
MIssion is supreme when its inconsequential 😂😭😭
About 50 per cent of the answers were No. Some even added a remark, saying the mission is supreme. Each one of them failed their test. - DaoHeist2yrCommented
That’s why itachi should live, or die a heroic way for shiruken to change his values😔 If these people could be forgiven for following and believing in the corrupted mizukages brutal ways, why not itachi? If the tailed beasts were controlled by other people to massacre a whole village and could still be forgiven, why not itachi? Save itachi 😭😭😭
"I can feel the cries of the people all the way from here. But, these are the same people who killed the Yuki clan just out of fear. They have been brainwashed to hate and to correct that, they need to be brainwashed to love again." He commented.