LFG

pls lord jordinio dont abandon this one it would be a pity.😭 pls lord jordinio dont abandon this one it would be a pity.😭 pls lord jordinio dont abandon this one it would be a pity.😭

i like this story very much i just finished binging🤣

MOAR🤤

LFG🔥🔥🔥

lord entrail praise you🤣🤣

lets fucking gooooo

he will get rekt

blue lock you are a man of culture

you blew my mind too with your words bro😂

lez goo

pls do a danmachi fanfic next pls do a danmachi fanfic next pls do a danmachi fanfic next pls do a danmachi fanfic next pls do a danmachi fanfic next pls do a danmachi fanfic next

mooooaaaarrrrr pls dont drop this i love it so much mooooaaaarrrrr mooooaaaarrrrrmooooaaaarrrrrmooooaaaarrrrrmooooaaaarrrrrmooooaaaarrrrrmooooaaaarrrrr

the novel is good keep it up man..ur chapters are quite long too so it is fine that its premium i guess

bite the dustoooooo!!!!! killer queeeeeennnnnn

So i read the novel and i actually think it is good. If your reading this I would actually want to read your very own original novel. Maybe it will be a video games genre😂. Maybe try adding your countries culture, make a similar story to SAO but with characters from your country. I wouldnt mind if you start it like SAO but branch off a bit from the plot like it will be a death game but your MC wont be like Kirito leaving everyone else. Hope you dont give up on writing man.😁👍