Thanks for the chapter this seems to be a huge change from the first draft of this novel I like some of the changes a lot. can't wait to see where this will go
I was thinking the same thing there is kinda a market for a novel with quidditch as the focus could be interesting
The only thing he doesn't get jealous of is Quidditch. In the Flight class, Sean's performance was not bad, but he has no plan to continue to develop it. He simply thinks Quidditch is not that fun.