this one, is [img=faceslap]

Baru tau ada yg versi Indonesia. disini lebih enak dibaca thor, maaf mungkin karena di versi inggrisnya ada beberapa typo yg bisa ngubah arti kalimatnya. Untuk cerita, keren thor gila, di akhir chap pertama bener2 ga ketabak. Di chapter kedua suasananya kerasa thor, trus juga itu penjelasan karakternya si Rega (MCnya) manteb deh. Penjabarannya tentang 'grace' detail banget, sampai dia experimen sendiri ke orang lain padahal dia ga punya wkwkwkwk. Keren thor, ditunggu chapter selanjutnya. Good luck thor [img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Mantab thor, karakter sama suasananya kerasa. tapi itu si Rega emng gitu ya, kadang jenius tapi kadang kaya memoloskan diri wkwkwk[img=update][img=update]

ini kata-kata Rega terbaik sih menurutku[img=recommend]

ngakak thor, ini mksudnya yg dari Yu**Oh itu kan wkwkwkwk

keren thor, udah baca yg bhs inggris eh taunya ada yg bhs indo wkwkwkwk. yg indo lebih enak dibaca, yg inggris masih ada typo2 thor. Btw keren thor ceritanya, kukira cuma fantasy biasa ternyata pas diakhir dibikin mikir trus baca keatas lagi wkwkwkk keren2. Good luck thor[img=recommend][img=recommend]

lah brati dia juga punya black-box dong?

anjirrr baru ngeh, kukira cuma typo itu tadi yg otomatdis, ternyata ada maksunya toh, keren keren thor[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

makin kesini makin seru thor, ga nyangka kalo ternyata orang tadi mau nyuri black box wkwkwk

wanjir, kukira tadi dia bilang patroli niatnya jaga pasien

baru sadar, kayanya typo tuh thor, 21-12-2012 kam harusnya?

LOL, is that because she has blu eyes so you bring that KAIBA thing? i like the way the main character solve the problem. And the way he think and his philosophy really hit me hard hahaha. [img=update][img=update]

There was still some typo but overall its a good story. I like the main character, he somewhat so pure yet so mysterious. The way it sucked me as i read the second chapter is.. somewhat i love it. The character explanation, it really show me the way he's thinking but somehow i still feel something hidden in his mind. For the story, i didn't expect someone would make one based with that 2012 LOL. Thank for your effort on making this[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Nice start! There's a good explanation about what happen, the holy friday and the grace. It's also realistic to how the situation become. I don't know i just feel something were off but i think the author will explain it later. And about the end of it. LOL who though about he would outsmarted that healer. Even if there was still some typo but overall I like it!![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]