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LakotaPhoenix

LakotaPhoenix

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When you have “the world is on fire” moments every other day at your job, you tend to come to the very real conclusion that you HAVE to set up some private, personal time. I read to escape then.

2018-07-20 JoinedUnited States
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  • LakotaPhoenix
    LakotaPhoenix1mth
    Commented

    It seems all these “memories” chapters are repeating themselves. I’m starting to think it’s a waste of coins to continue this series.

    Ch 425 Trap of Memories X - Envy
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    Why Should I Stop Being a Villain
    Fantasy · Raos_IOI
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  • LakotaPhoenix
    LakotaPhoenix1yr
    Commented

    I hope things are going okay for Zeus and that we may see another chapter or two this month.

    Ch 875 Chapter 875 Attacked
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    Monarch of Time
    Eastern · ZeusTheOlympian
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  • LakotaPhoenix
    LakotaPhoenix1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

    Ch 1104 Awakening The Great Kraken!
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    Supremacy Games
    Sci-fi · MidGard
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  • LakotaPhoenix
    LakotaPhoenix2yr
    Commented

    If the writer wants to kill their MC, just finish it already. How many times are you going to ride around on the same carousel horse? It doesn’t take you anywhere else but in circles.

    Ch 2469 Dao of Devouring!
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    Unrivaled Medicine God
    Eastern · Feng Yise
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  • LakotaPhoenix
    LakotaPhoenix2yr
    Commented

    *their limits

    Although she kept this thought to herself the coincidences that happened in the test also concerned her. A mage from Roland academy would know there limits well when doing a test, she found it hard to believe that they would make a mistake and cause magic sickness. And with the bow, If a human tried to use pure strength to break a bow's string it would be near impossible.
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    My Dragon System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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  • LakotaPhoenix
    LakotaPhoenix2yr
    Commented

    “It is time for us to journey towards Avion Academy. The journey will take…”

    "To Future Avrion academy students, I am squire master Lancy. You must obey my commands at all times unless someone of higher rank intervenes. It is time for us to journey onwards towards Avrion Academy to journey will take about seven days."
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    My Dragon System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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  • LakotaPhoenix
    LakotaPhoenix2yr
    Commented

    死吧 = somewhat polite suggestion for the recipient to "Die" 人类 = straight up translates to "human" So the following translated phrase "Die, human!" is the translation of this phrase. I can only guess that the translator included the original phrase for those who might be interested in the fact that 吧 was used.

      "死吧,人类!"
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    Lord Xue Ying
    Eastern · I Eat Tomatoes
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  • LakotaPhoenix
    LakotaPhoenix3yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

    Ch 1 Chapter 1 A Life like death
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    Monarch of Time
    Eastern · ZeusTheOlympian
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  • LakotaPhoenix
    LakotaPhoenix3yr
    Posted

    —- Shameless Author Review—- ThIs story employs a rich vocabulary and complex sentence structure throughout that can be commonly seen in college level writing. Reading up to the ppint of this review, around chapter 30, which had been released within two weeks of this novel’s debute, we can see this... Three seemingly unrelated stories that take place in different worlds and time periods. Starting with aN American girl in the modern age, whom dreams of a second world of angels. This world of angels is something that has merely been hinted to in her own time through ancient scrolls and an old play. Yet, she experiences it in her dreams and unknowingly, she is drawn in to the point of emotional investment. When tragedy strikes in the dream world, the girl encounters her own accident in the modern world. Before you know it, you are yanked ubruptly into feudal Japan to meet yet another girl who has been dreaming of the modern world and witnessed the accident. Yet, there seems to be a physical connection between the two time periods. As it progresses, small hints and clues can be found that tie all of these different worlds together as the common link becomes clearer.

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    Waking Dream
    Teen · LakotaPhoenix
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  • LakotaPhoenix
    LakotaPhoenix3yr
    Posted

    Honestly, this is the best written story I have seen on this site from a grammatical point of view. With that said, it has made the story a pleasure to read. I know a lot of people would complain about not having power levels, hierarchy and the world's background explained in advance, but.... I see this as a way to define an average author from a talented one. For he is writing from the MC's point of view and explains it as the MC finds out about it. Which helps break some of the predictable loops and traps seen in many other novels. Not to mention, it allows for further development of the story and creativity. The story itself starts off in what sounds like a Western-based fantasy world with magic and the common, run-of-the-mill "MC encounters trouble, then overcomes with their OPness" kind of strategy until they leave that country. Then you start seeing a more Eastern fantasy type of cultivation, but the Western-based magic is not completely forgotten and tags along the way. As the MC gets stronger, he is pulled into political intrigue, shadows of war, a hidden history of the world, and heavily guarded secrets... by this time, his general OPness is no longer as apparent as there is much, much more dangerous and powerful entities he is tip-toeing around. The character development of the MC really takes off later on in the novel as he matures and is not the typical arrogant, hot-blooded type that is prone to knee-jerk reactions and beating people at the drop of a hat. He is more of the patient, calculating type, which kind of leads him to feel a bit more like an anti-hero than a hero. The only complaint I have, is that there is quite a few days between chapters coming out. However, they are coming at a stable speed.

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    Paragon of Destruction
    Fantasy · TomVanDyke
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