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I Love the Supernatural and Fantastic. The two things I’d wish for the most in life is to improve the health of my loved ones and to increase my height to 6ft tall, lol.
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Sooo….how does this work in terms of the plot??????
And also only because he let them
Yeah, how no one else knew the “Eren” who injured Griselda is a major plothole imo (they did a plethora of background checks and found nothing strange), considering even Xenovia knows about the incident.
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Good point, but let’s ignore that lol
First part of dialogue needs to be fixed. I assume that’s the part where he asks for any grievances to be placed upon him and not the muggle man
I think he needs to use simpler words to really portray the childlike innocence. There’s something off about using higher level vocabulary when he was mistreated, malnourished, and orphaned
Nasty/disgusted tone
Licking dog could be replaced for “simp” or similar term
I have no idea what this sentence means
Just use “Holy Father” each time it’s used. Also, I think “act” matches the sentence better than “play”
Damage and pain reduction skill, essentially
Ooh, great talent effect then