LovelySnail

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It would be nice if the writing style weren't so poetic; his feelings are always evident, which makes them seem banal after a while, not to mention the writing style that uses a lot of comparisons that don't differ in the end. But the story is easy to read.

The story is very good and the concept is interesting, but the narration is a bit Shakespearean and poetic which causes a disconnect and difficulty in immersion since I would prefer the narration of everyday life to be more mundane and normal, thanks for the chapter!

achei que a região de Alola ''não existia'' nessa realidade, então como que ela sabe os atributos de turtonador?

The story is interesting to read, but the mistakes in the Pokémon names make it a bit difficult to continue, like the one with a wurmple and its evolutionary line doesn't even learn garssy terrain.

That's a rapid evolution, in less than 20 years they went from primitive tribes that use spears and bows and arrows to having glasses and stiletto heels, and apparently they are not considering the culture of the Cannon region which is Japanese with kimonos and such. Thanks for the chapter.

Cynthia's third pokemon must be a Ditto, it changes about 3 times in one chapter, stufful -> teddiursa -> spinda, it just needs to become a pancham or a cubchoo.

Electrike is a pure electric type and doesn't learn bug bite, it must be a translation error since I think it was supposed to be a joltik even though it's not from the Hoenn region.

What will she look like when she evolves into Incineroar? Will she look like a muscular male?