Soso, take my pain away

Casual sexism - Check Impossibly calm mc - Check Powers and abilities that magically appear for MC without being properly explained - Check All the ingredients for an immature Chinese novel.….

Facts. And for a story that is about MC being max-leveled, you seem like you really need it MC. Take it.

Illogical. Obvious plot plant to make MC look good.

Facts, author is not chained by common sense

The story is a good one. Great in all aspects. World-building is careful and elaborate. The characters are three-dimensional, with a delicate balance between suspense and reasoning. You can see that the author knows what he is doing. However, there are two reasons why I cannot give this story five stars. One, is that in the name of being mysterious and unpredictable, the story often ends up in the realm of unrealistic. The author creates fantastic and convoluted plots that are so complex and so difficult that only plot armor ends up seeing the protagonist through. The second issue is tied to the first. The power gap between the protagonist and the main antagonists in the story is so vast that it is untenable to think of a scenario where the protagonist wins. This is interesting because most times, with game transmigration stories, it is the opposite. Here, it would do a lot of good if the protagonist had or will gain more power as the story progresses, not even in allies or resources, tools or weapons, but in their personal ability itself. This is due to the nature of the antagonists. They seem infallible and impossible to beat, and without corresponding power, I’m afraid the story will simply become an exercise in plot armour. Allies can be made to betray and tools are ineffective against them. More than once already, the author has created impossible situations and had to create miracles just to provide a believable resolution. A story cannot continue this way. Not a good story at least. Author, you can do better, so do better.

Beautiful writing, had hoped that he had more than tricks because they are the most predictable path for the story. To make it more realistic, it might be a good idea to power him up to at fight with multiple void sovereigns on equal footing

SPOKEN LIKE A BOSS

William…brother, I don’t really see a way outta this. Do you? Because if you do I would appreciate a breakdown, it’s five against two and they are all apparently stronger than you, now is the time for hidden cards.

Can’t lie, this whole chapter… it was like nothing was said

Feels like OPM, when MC takes forever to get to where he should be

Bosss. Tell me you haven’t dropped.

Very dark turn, very early on

There’s good, there’s great and there’s HOLY FU*KING SHIT WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN ALL MY LIFEEEE!!! This novel is the latter in every single way. There is depth, conflict, intrigue and all of these combine to make an insatiable, gripping story. It is novels like this that make me so fucking hopeful for Webnovel to turn things around. I have no complaints, I complain all the time and I have none, not a single one. The world-building is measured and deliberate, and we don’t receive too much or too little. The character interaction is specific and realistic and several characters are flawed and multi-dimensional. The plot is complex but user-friendly, there is so much going on and it is all intertwined but there are different takes on the dilemmas that plague the MC. And the author has managed to make it easy to comprehend and flow with. Speaking of, the MC himself is well-crafted and not too much about him has been given away yet. I genuinely love this work. Author, keep up the good goddamn work.

Nah, he’s just a dumba*s

Brotherly, why not run away?

😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

Okay, I must have missed something here. Are the Desolate Lands on the Demon Continent? If they are, why would humans, knowing that they could die, leave everything behind and follow him without objection? It is one thing to follow where safety is unknown, it is another to follow knowing that danger and probably death are very, very likely. If indeed the Desolate Lands are on the Demon Continent, then it is unrealistic to say that people will follow someone just because they are they strongest, without really knowing them. I understand that this is a world where might makes right but I also understand that these aren’t animals, or stupid creatures incapable of cognition. These are humans + creatures capable of cognitive function and I’d be hard pressed to believe that they would just follow blindly like that.

While you are right about exposing her mage identity, she was justified in her actions. If it wasn’t the village chief, then it would be someone else

Exactly. Or he has to create spells with the grimoire